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Author: Pheonix DeLoures
Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-24-03 - Updated: 10-24-03 - id:1429897

Kilu's Journey
Kilu stalked into the room, his deep blue shirt reflecting lightly, matching his icy blue eyes, at least in tone.
Behind the cool blue, anger and resentment burned as he returned to the place of his birth.
His and his twin brother.
Kilu's eyes fairly misted over as he thought about his lost brother, but he brushed the thought as well as the 'tears' away.

He looked around, almost confused as to which place he had walked into, but soon realized that it was the pub down the street from his old house.
Too bad I left before I ever got the chance to come here...
He gazed around the smoky, dimly lit room.
Not that I was missing too much....

His eyes caught on about fifteen people sitting at one table, being loud and rambunctious, their noise almsot instantly angering the nineteen year-old male, who's response was to run his fingers through his shiny blonde hair.
He heard someone in the large group comment snidely, directed at him, but he ignored it.

He looked further to his left, but found little but a few couples drunkenly making out, and one female who looked extremely disgruntled at the behaviour of her friends.
To her, he nodded his sympathies, then turned the the bar keep and ordered his drink. He wasn't too sure what he ordered, but it nearly immediately slid across the slick surface of the bar counter, and he tasted it gingerly.
For something so little, it sure was bitter, but he drank most if it in one gulp, not wanting to look bad.

Again he heard some angry, shouted comment thrown at him, and assuming it was from the original group, he looked to them.
But noone was looking at him anymore.
They all had their attention directed toward the girl and her boyfriend, or her date at least, because she was attempting to calm him down, so Kilu knew she knew the man.
He had his big beefy hand closed around her slender wrist, and this pinned against her chest as he forced her closer to the wall, effectively removing her exiting options.

Kilu felt his blood begin to boil, hating everything about this guy.
Who was he to think he could push around someone smaller than himself?
How was that fair in any way?

Kilu took about three steps in the direction of them, and then over heard their conversation, which virtually stopped him in his tracks.

"Bitch, flirting with some hot blonde guy huh?"
He slapped her, angering Kilu greatly,
"You think I'm gonna let you get away with that? Huh?"
Another slap.
He stopped listening, and dashed forward, the last five feet, and as the man was raising his hand to slap her again, Kilu closed his won hand around the man's wrist and jerked it backwards, knocking the violent guy off balance, and onto the floor, tugging the girl away from the wall and flinging her toward some lit candles.
Kilu caught her in one smooth motion, one arm across her stomach, one across her back, and she stopped moving toward the flames.
Still in his arms, she turned to look up at him, her golden eyes matching her golden hair, and she blushed and smiled her thanks.
Kilu flicked his eyes to the floor, where her 'friend' was begining to rise.
Kilu lightly pushed the girl away from him behind him where he could protect her, and waited for the other male to stand.

He rose from the floor and swung at Kilu's head, who dodged nimbly, and then quickly swung his arm which crashed down on the man's back, throwing him to the floor.
Kilu bent down, his piercing blue eyes locked onto the girl, and whispered to the man,
"I am her guardian. If you so much as touch her or any other woman in my town, I'll hunt you down, and make you sorry."

With that as his final closure, he rose, nodded at the woman, who reached out to him, and turned and walked out the door, leaving half of the population of the bar staring at the bleeding male lying prone on the floor, and the other half staring after him.

*Authors note: heh, Kilu and Kinon were my favorite RP Characters, but for artistic differences, I had to do this.
The next chapter will basically be completely History, as a briefing.
Please Read and Review

Kilu and Kinon Linthy are © to Me, Pheonix DeLoures/Lisa Cave*



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