Mind Me By Kenishiro (27/10/03) {This sounded silly because they don't rhyme but I think it is better this way ;P} Strangely enough I saw you yesterday, By the seaside, near the bay, You were crying as I recall, But I dare not to ask why, Alas I can't stop wondering, Which is why I am here, To see if you're okay. Feedback: Yes, please. Constructive criticism appreciated as well.
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