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Blood
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chainedfreedom PM
Its a bit, i dunno, a jumble of words, but alot of the word, 'Blood', thats y it has the rating although i dunno if im just being 2 careful...
Rated: Fiction T - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Words: 77 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10-28-03 - id: 1433034
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Blood,
Red,
Black,
Blood
Dizzy,
Pass out,
Red,
Blood,
Eyes,
Blood,
Red,
Black,
Teeth,
Blood,
Sink,
Pierce,
Blood,
Neck,
Blood,
Red,
Black,
Pass out,
Breath,
Eyes,
Gone,
Blood.

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It said that this piece was to short to be entered, which I do agree on.
But I want it in!!!
It's only a jumble of words, but I still wrote it from an idea, so I
consider it a poem.no matter how weird it is.lolz
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