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Title: Developing
Author: AnnaSun
Date: 26/10/03
I submerse the photo onto the liquid,
Rocking back and forth,
Tears streaming from my eyes,
I can see the danger developing,
The picture comes as no surprise.
I stand amongst the broken land,
The chemicals combining,
Two people have begun to fight,
The soldiers marching, signing.
I see the red light blearing out,
The guns are held up high,
The people lie amongst the dead,
Exposed to darkness, why?
I weep amongst the poppies grown,
Some bombs are not defused,
The photo now in the ‘stop’
A word I wish was used.
I crouch amongst the grave stones here,
Rocking back and forth,
And soldiers not named,
The photo tells a story today,
But who is it that we should blame?
An:/ War is one of my favourite poetic subjects. I really like photography and am studying photography at the moment. I decided to combine the two subjects into a poem. I hope you like it. Good/bad points, improvements? Feedback greatly appreciated as usual. Thank you.