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Neon Project: Earth
This story is what Aeon Souls was before I started writing it. I wrote this story called Neon Project Earth in my Freshman and Sophomore years in High School. I was in a Resource class and was very bored most of the time, so they allowed me to write on their computers and let me save it to their disk. They saved the disk over the summer and I was allowed to continue the story the following year. I will warn you now to not look for anything amazing or original in this story, because during my Freshman year the Cartoon Network had started to release the Dragonball Z series, and I watched it a lot. I was also big into searching the Internet for various anime pictures and talking with people about different anime. So my mind was greatly influenced by these things, as well as such things as various RPGs like Final Fantasy 7. But three or four years after I finished writing this Neon Project: Earth story I began to reconsider how I had done things and knew that I could add a lot more to the story in a more detailed and original fashion.
I am not asking for anyone to read or enjoy this old version of the Aeon Souls story, but more that if you liked it or read it before that you can use this to compare between my years of story writing. As the story of Aeon Souls progresses I will release more of the contents of this story so that I don't reveal the hints of what will happen in the future of my story!
The Neon Project: Earth story, which I must admit I have no idea why I chose that title for such a story, is 72 pages long, though the text size does variate with chapter titles and other things. I thought I was so great by writing that much. Imagine how I must feel now with Aeon Souls at over 250 pages, all a consistant text size, and covering an extremely more detailed and characturizd 13 pages of the original story. Try taking that ratio through mathematics and tell me how many pages at the least you think the whole story will end up if I were to take the same ratio to the whole 72 pages! )
Until then, let the reminescing begin, and I hope you enjoy my story Aeon Souls!
- Chamzel