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Hey everyone. New poem! I Have another one, I’ll post it soon.
I really tried to create visual pictures, and out came this. Please review!
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Pure at heart, pure of mind
Not a sin on me that you can find.
Clean and innocent, no wrong have I done,
Bright and cheery, as much as the sun.
But that was before you came alone,
Before you enchanted me with your dark song.
Your black melody struck me, like a bow,
Its dreary and black tune was something I didn't know.
I followed it though the magical wood, searching for you,
Searching for this sound, that to me, was so new.
My white wings took me so far, I thought I wouldn't last much longer,
And the only thing that kept me going, was that the music got stronger.
At last I came to it, the source of the dizzying sound,
I looked upon the dark grove that I had found.
There I saw you, sitting upon your throne,
Of blackened wood and heavy stone.
You looked upon with your loving eyes,
And then, I couldn't see that they were nothing but lies.
For then I was too dizzy to care,
That there was absolutely no love for me there.
And I didn't see that this was your trick,
For your cunning ways were just too slick.
And I was blinded by your sight, your song…your touch,
That I didn't see that I was now in your demonic clutch.
But I did not care, for I wanted you so,
I wanted to stay with you, I never wanted to go.
So I let you use me, I let you tear me apart,
I let you ravage me, rape me, and smash up my heart.
I lost control, I began to spin,
I forgot what world I was really in.
I didn't realize what was happening to me,
I was drowning in black, drowning in a bloody sea.
You tainted me, poisoned my soul,
You turned my mind into a black hole.
Now laying here, you left me to die,
You shattered my wings, I can no longer fly.
My world is spinning, slowly turning
And all I have ever known is wildly burning.
Last minutes coming, I remember your song,
The song that hypnotized me for so very long.
My pure soul is now contaminated,
My mind no longer illuminated.
All because of you, my killer, my love…
You've left, you soared like a black dove.
So now, I shall leave this world,
And drift down to hell, where my soul has been sold.