Well this is a story that I made this year, I think it’s pretty good. Oh yea and I had to redo the chapter, oh man I forgot your name but thank you for telling me about the paragraph thingies

“Mimi! Wake up! School is gonna start in 10 minutes! Hurry!” my mother yelled, my eyes snapped open, 10 minutes!? It takes me almost 15 for just the walk! I jumped from my bed and ran to my drawers, throwing on whatever smelled clean (a blue T-shirt, black capris, and black sneakers).

I grabbed my backpack, threw it on my back, gave my dad a quick kiss on the cheek and ran as fast as my legs can carry me to school. I wasn’t the world’s fastest runner or anything, but when I’m panicked about something, I run like rabid dogs were after me. In this case I ran like a maniac.

I ran inside my Junior High school, making a really sharp turn and running inside me homeroom screaming, “I’M HERE! I’M HERE!”I fell to the floor from exhaustion.

The others laughed at my weirdness, my friends, Ez and Ada just shook their heads (which I don’t blame them for). My teacher, Mr. Jose, chuckled “Well Mimi, sleep in again?” I laughed nervously. “Well you made it just in time” he said. Almost two seconds after he said that, the tardy bell rang. I sighed in relief and went to my desk next to Ada and Ez.

“Nice entrance there Mimi” Ada said sarcastically. I smiled like a dork. “Yea but last week‘s entrance is still the top” Ez said while trying to hold in a laugh. Last week I was late also but I tripped on a nicely placed banana peel and slid straight through homeroom running over Mr. José. I still think that Ez put it there but I’ll wait until she spills it out

After school, I waved good bye to Ada and Ez until tomorrow

I walked through the nearly empty sidewalk kicking a rock along with me. I looked around at the tall buildings. The city looks a lot different when your running faster than the speed of sound, I thought to myself. I laughed at the thought, it was the only thing entertaining me besides the rock. As I continued, I noticed growing shadows around the ground; I looked up and saw black clouds gathering together. I don’t like getting caught in the rain so I started to run home hoping to out run it.

I looked up in the sky and I knew I wasn’t going to make it. I ran into the nearest ally for shelter until the rain passed.” Summer rains...you can never predict them” I said to myself copying my mothers words...oh wait,”Or was it spring rains?” I said out loud. As I continued to ponder this, I didn’t notice someone behind me. Before I knew it, I felt a sharp feeling in my back. It felt like a needle but the pain was much more. The next thing I knew my vision began to blur as my eyelids grew heavier; I didn’t even feel the ground when I fell.

Sorry if it’s short but I just wanted to see if anyone was interested before I put the next chapter up and I promise the next chapter is more interesting

If ya flame me it’s ok cuz I’m just not gonna look at it

Angel of the Sea