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Author: Fairytale Gurl
Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Reviews: 119 - Published: 01-18-04 - Updated: 08-02-05 - id:1500189
Okay, this is my first fiction but I have written a fanfiction on . I would be very grateful if you guys would check it out. I'm under the same screen name. Well I hope you guys like this and don't forget to REVIEW!

Prologue

Rain fell from the sky like waterfalls as winds howled. Trees were blown from side to side as leaves fell to the ground. A beautiful castle-like mansion stood at the top of a hill over looking other smaller manors and village houses. Yes it was a stormy night on July 7th 1437. All the numerous windows of the castle-like mansion were dark save for one in the west tower.

In that huge, extravagantly decorated room a pretty young girl sat reading a piece of parchment, her eyes troubled and sorrowful.

To my darling Amber Callista Dante,

By the time you get this I will be gone, dead. Why am I killing myself? I suppose I don't even know myself. I suppose Marcus was one of the factors.

Another reason.

Countless times you have asked me questions about my childhood, and countless times I have refused to tell you. Well Amber you shall hopefully never find out. I'll just tell you one thing; unlike you I don't have the doting parents, or the perfect life. I have a dark, dark past. A past that will always haunt me, a past I am not able to forget. Alas, I shall never have my revenge but I must let my troubled soul rest.

I beg you not to grieve for my passing and to simply move on. Remember that I love you and will not ever forget you in life or in death.

And now I bid you my last farewell as I say good-bye to this world and I open the doors to another.

Lots of love

Your best friend

Jennifer Nicole Tredon

The letter slipped from Amber's hand (a/n Amber is that girl that is sitting in the room. Just thought that I would clear that up just in case) and fluttered to the ground, many words smeared by freshly fallen tears. Amber wept as memories come crashing down on her. Jennifer's beautiful red hair, her lovely golden cat-like eyes, the mysterious aura that she seemed to be surrounded by.

Then even more painful memories crossed through ambers mind. Her and Jennifer picking flowers from the gardens, her and Jennifer laughing, her and Jennifer pulling pranks, her and Jennifer getting into trouble, Jennifer and Marcus kissing in the moonlight as she spied on them.

Marcus! The boy who was partly responsible for Jennifer's death. Marcus had been Jennifer's boy-friend and Jennifer had loved him with all her heart but Marcus had just used her and then had dumped her for Susie another village girl. Amber vowed that she would give Marcus a good ass kicking that he deserved. Amber and Jennifer had both be-friended a crook who had taught them how to fight and they could both take on more than one of the king's knights and win.

Amber cried for hours her sobs echoing around the large room. Finally she got up washed her face before climbing into bed and blowing out the candle. However right before she fell asleep she whispered eight words into the darkness,

"I will never let anyone steal my heart!"

Well what did you guys think of it? Love it? Like it? It's okay? Dislike it? Hate it? I hope you guys enjoyed it and please review. I need to know if I should continue it and I wasn't sure about the date so just ignore it. It's set in the medieval times. You know with princes and princesses. Hope you liked it and please Read and REVIEW!! And any suggestions for this story are welcomed!!

Luv

Fairytale Gurl



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