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Title: Danny
Author: AnnaSun
Rating: G
Date: 6th March 2004
At graves stones two apart I cried,
The rain was falling,
Washing away the rose petals laid by my love,
One tender kiss was all we made until,
Danger, dark skies, cries, smashing, screams….death!
I laid more flowers, touching the roots of his heart,
And then I hugged the grave,
The representation of a body,
Of my lover, of my man, of my soul mate forever,
The rain kept falling, weeping along with me,
A funeral song, requiem,
The cold grave stone pieced my heart,
And shook me like a whirlwind,
I stopped, I cried louder, and louder,
The thorns scratching the ground,
I couldn’t hear myself think,
The slab of grey stone calling,
Danny.
AN:/ I really liked the outcome of this poem. I enjoy writing emotions into my poems. Feedback greatly appreciated.