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Hello Readers,
This is my prologue type thing so skip it if you like although, reading it might be beneficial to you who are trying to understand.
The point of view changes with every chapter. The very first chapter and wherever the characters are narrating is five years before the third person observations that begin in chapter four. Read it. You'll get the hang of it. Lol.
As long as I'm here I might as well clarify a few things. I'm here for feed-back so I don't update unless I get a review. I prefer constructive criticism (or wanton praise, that works too, lol) but even if you just type your name to let me know you've read it. I don't want to waste my time on something no one is going to read. So please, review.
If you want a guide to go by to help me improve, I was trying to present detailed characters in this one. I want to make sure there is a definite difference between the first person narrators, so hopefully reviews can help with that. I'm also particularly interesting in what people think of the plot and if they can solve the mystery and figure out what's going on. The point of view shifting is also new to me. I don't think I like it because it's confusing to read but if I get a positive feed back from reviewers I might reconsider my prejudices against it.
That being said... Enjoy the story. I hope to have you're name on my review list thirty one chapters from now.
Lisette Jester