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Author: Adrian Clyde
Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/General - Reviews: 17 - Published: 03-17-04 - Updated: 07-14-04 - id:1553478

(WARNING!!!!! THINGS SAID OR DONE IN THIS SERIES ARE PRETTY EXPLICT(well, not really but anyway) IF SOMEONE SAID SOMETHING YOU DON’T LIKE, PLEASE DO NOT COMPLAIN!)

                                                                                               IN RAVENVILLE

                                                                                           EPISODE 11: CRIMES

                                                                                                SERIES FINALE

 Mostly everyone is over at Chelsea’s rather large house on this late Sunday night. Vance, Marques and Tucker are in the basement playing cards and Chelsea, Whitney and Sasha are upstairs in their nightclothes talking about girl stuff in Chelsea’s room. Rhonda and Ken are in Chelsea’s kitchen looking through her refrigerator.

“Your parents are not coming home for the night, right?” Rhonda asks.

“Nope.” Ken answers. Rhonda takes out a soda can and closes the frig.

“I wonder what the boys downstairs are doing. Stupid Vance won’t let me go down there!” Rhonda takes a sip of her soda. “I wonder what they sleep in. Hmm… Maybe they sleep naked!”

“Ew. You wanna know what your brother sleeps in?”

“Uh, no.” Rhonda pops Ken in head. “Shut up!”

*_*_*_*_*_*

    Meanwhile, in Chelsea’s basement.

“Uno!” Marques yells.

Tucker looks through his cards. “Oh shit…”

Vance looks through his cards too. “OOOhh!”

“Tucker, it’s your turn. Are you gonna go or what?” Marques asks.

“Shut up! I’m tryna think of a strategy.”

“That’s gonna take forever…” Vance says. Tucker puts a blue number 2.

“Haha!” Vance says. Vance puts down a draw four card. “Draw four, Mark.”

“Shiiiiiit.” Marques puts down a draw four card of his own. “Uno out!”

*_*_*_*_*_*

  Meanwhile, the girls are upstairs in their underclothes talking about girl stuff in Chelsea’s room.

“He has the best body ever! The first time I saw him naked I thought I was dreaming!” Sasha says faning herself.

“That’s all Julian have is body. But his face isn’t all that…” Whitney says.

“Shut up. You’re only saying that because you finally got you some from Vance. Now his face isn’t all that.” Sasha replies.

“Sasha, stop you lying. He’s like the best looking guy in town and you know it too.” Whitney says. Sasha stays silent.

“Soooooo……” Chelsea says. “I think Tucker is so sexy!” Chelsea says happily.

“EWWW!!!!!” Sasha and Whitney screams.

“Anyway… Sasha, about Julian, are you worried about him and Nora spending so much time together lately?” Whitney asks.

“No. See, unlike Vance, Julian will never hurt me like Vance has when we were dating…or whatever that was. I asked Julian out of curiosity about it.” Sasha says.

“What did he say?” Chelsea asks.

“Him and Nora are working on a project. See? No cheating. I have faith in him.” Sasha says.

“I dunno…” Whitney says. “You can be pretty…uh, well, not smart when it comes to boys. You fall in love too quickly.” Whitney adds. Chelsea nods in agreement.

“Don’t you two sit here and judge me, okay?! Julian is not cheating on me!” Sasha yells. There is suddenly a knock on Chelsea’s door. The girls puts on long shirts and cover themselves and runs downstairs.

*_*_*_*_*_*

  The boys and Rhonda and Ken are already at the door. The girls walk to the door.

“Is that mom?” Chelsea asks.

“Nope.” Ken answers. Whitney answers the door.

“Eugene?” She says.

“Hey, guys! What’s up?” Eugene says.

“Get him out of here.” Tucker says.

“Uh… I don’t think you want to do that.” Eugene says.

“Why not?” Tucker asks.

“Well, I over heard Julian and Nora talking yesterday.” Sasha gasps.

“What were they talking about?” Sasha asks curiously.

“About Chelsea and you, Tucker.”

“About… Me?” Chelsea asks.

“What about me?!” Tucker asks, cracking his knuckles. Eugene takes a step back.

“Nora was going on and on about revenge. She says she wants Chelsea, Leo, some girl named Veronica and Tucker to get the worst punishments ever. She paid Julian fifty thousand dollars to call someone that will make sure all four of them die! If they do die, Nora will pay Julian two million extra dollars!”

“No. Death’s too easy for Nora. She would want to do something that would stick with them for the rest of their lives.” Whitney says.

“She’s such a bitch! I hate her!” Chelsea says.

“She’s still mad about getting’ beat up? She deserved it!” Marques says.

“If you saw her face afterwards, you’d be pissed too! She’s been wearing paper bags ever sense then!” Everyone looks at Tucker and Chelsea.

“It’s not about me, so I don’t care.” Vance says.

“Does Leo know?” Tucker asks.

Eugene shrugs. “I guess not.” Tucker and Chelsea looks at each other.

“What are you going to do?” Chelsea asks.

“Simple. We’re gonna kill them.” Tucker answers.

*_*_*_*_*_*

    Meanwhile, Julian and Nora are talking at the port. Nora is now wearing an angel mask to cover her face.

“I called him a few hours. He’s on his way.” Julian says.

“Good. Those ungrateful poor people will get what’s coming to them!” Nora says.

“Let’s get one thing straight. I’m not doing this for you. I’m doing this for me. I wanted to have Tucker dead a long time ago. So we’re getting them back my way, got that?”

“Yeah, Julian, that’s real nice. But don’t forget who’s paying you. If you do not follow my orders, I will have you punished as well. I have sources everywhere.” Nora says, obviously bluffing.

“Then you do it yourself!” Julian walks off.

“Julian, get back here! I suppose you don’t want the money then!” Nora sighs. “Why is he making this so hard?”

*_*_*_*_*_*

   The next day, Tucker, Chelsea, Leo and Veronica are all at Leo’s house sitting in his living talking about what Eugene told them last night.

“That bitch!” Veronica yells loudly.

“Maybe it won’t be so bad. We should talk to them. Help them change their minds.” Leo says.

“I wish we could… But it’s not going to work.” Chelsea sighs.

“I see we run them over! Or, we could blow up their houses!” Veronica shouts.

Leo chuckles. “We can’t do that, Veronica. We should as non-violent as possible.”

“You can, but if I see either one of them on the street, I’m killing them.”

“Tucker, no.” Chelsea begs.

“Then what do we do?! Leo, they’re talking about ending your life! We should get them before they get us!” Veronica says. 

“Then we call the police! We have to reason with them some how” Leo says.

Tucker pulls out a gun and loads it. “I’m done with reasoning.” Tucker storms out of Leo’s house with Veronica following him.

“This is not good…” Chelsea says sadly.

*_*_*_*_*_*

   Hours later, Lily is walking around town when she is confronted by Julian.

“What do you want?” Lily asks with an attitude.

“I wanna help!” Eugene says.

“Oh really? You can help by turning around.”

“No! I wanna help you and your sister! Tucker wants to kill them!”

“What?!”

“It’s true. Chelsea told Sasha who told me so now I’m telling you.”

“Yes, Nora’s a bitch and all… But that’s my twin sister. I can’t let them kill her! Eugene, you say you wanna help? Well, stop Tucker at all costs!”

“Will do!”

*_*_*_*_*_*

   Meanwhile, Vance is walking home when he suddenly bumps in to someone. The sky is mostly dark and cloudy…sure signs of bad things coming this way.

“Damn, watch it!” Vance snaps. Vance turns around and the person who bumped in to him is Whitney, who looked a bit hurt.

“Oh… You.” He says.

“Vance.” Whitney says as she walks to him. “I messed up big time, I know, but please forgive. You were trying to help me and I blew you off. I’m really----!” Vance cuts Whitney off by passionately kissing her on her lips. She couldn’t believe he did that. Could it be that Vance was never really mad at Whitney in the first place? Whitney did not refuse. After a while, Vance stops.

“Whitney, I’m sorry too. Your parents walked out on you, I had no right to…”

“Shh…” Whitney kisses Vance again. “You don’t have to explain anything.” She adds.

“Vance!” Says a voice. Vance turns around to face the voice. It turns out to be Rhonda and Ken.

“Rhonda… Go away!” Vance says.

“Something happened to Marques!” She says. Whitney gasps.

*_*_*_*_*_*

  Rhonda and Ken lead Vance and Whitney to a park. They walk them behind a pile of bushes and there he is. Marques is lying on the ground with brushes and cuts everywhere. Vance kneels down and begins to get a little teary.

“Marques, you can’t die, man! You can’t!”

“I hope…” Marques says.

“Oh my God!” Whitney calls the police on her cell phone.

There’s a piece of paper on Marques’s shirt. Vance picks up the paper and it reads. “This is a warning. Sincerely, yours truly”.

Vance shows Whitney the paper.

“Who would write that?” She asks.

“Whoa.” Ken said. “He got beat up.”

“No… Really?” Rhonda asks.

“Isn’t it obvious? This is Nora’s handwriting!”

“Why would she hurt Marques? He’s dating her sister!” Whitney says.

“I don’t know… We better see if Leo can tell us anything. Since Lily tells Nora everything, and Nora runs her mouth to him.”

*_*_*_*_*_*

 Vance and Whitney go to Leo’s house. The ambulance came, so Marques is safe. Vance knocks on Leo’s door and he answers.

“Come in…” He said, somewhat sadly.

Vance and Whitney walk in, leaving his door opened. Leo is packing his bags.

“I’m not staying here. Tucker and Veronica are about to do something really stupid and I’m not getting involved in this.”

“Where are you going?” Whitney asks.

“I’m not telling anyone. I know why you’re here… You found Marques.”

“Bastard! You knew that was going to happen?!” Vance asks in rage.

Leo nods. Vance punches Leo in his face. Whitney holds him back. “Get control over yourself.” She says.

Leo holds his cheek somewhat bitterly. “I can see why you’re mad… Marques was a pawn. He was used to slow Tucker down, to bring Tucker’s guard down… But instead, it made him more pissed.”

“Who stabbed Marques?” Whitney asks.

“Julian.”

“Julian?!” Both Whitney and Vance say in udder surprise.

“Nora told him to. She thought if Marques was sent to the hospital, then Tucker would be worrying about him instead… Giving her and Julian the opportunity to strike first. Lily and Eugene were coming up with a similar plan, only it would involve rumors and not anyone getting hurt. I would have much preferred Lily’s plan.” Leo says.

“What’s a lot of info. Who told you all this shit?” Vance asks.

“Who else? The one and only Eugene. I’m going now… Do NOT tell anyone I left. I don’t want police following me too. Everyone is at the port. Sasha and Chelsea went down there to try to stop their boyfriends…but it’s no use. They both are too stuck up to listen. Vance, Whitney, I suggest you two stay out of this. Some crazy shit is going to go down at that port tonight. Trust me, you don’t want to be in this. Probably none of them are going to survive tonight. Well, I’m out.” Leo takes his bags and leave. He stuffs them in the trunk of his car and drives off.

“I don’t feel right about this… I think we can stop this.” Whitney says.

“Are you crazy? I’m not going down there!” Vance says.

“Vance, please. Your friends are done there. Tucker and Chelsea could die tonight. Are you gonna settle for that?”

Vance took awhile to think about that. He definitely values his life more then theirs….but it would haunt him if he could have saved them, but chose not to.

“Okay, Whitney. I’m going.”

Whitney smiles.

*_*_*_*_*_*

   It’s night now. Tucker and Veronica are at the port alone. Something is definitely not right about that…

“Where the hell is that bitch?!” Veronica asks. “C’mon out and stop hiding!” She yells.

Tucker pulls out his gun. He’s through with talking. He just wants Julian dead. Lily and Eugene arrive at the port soon after. Lily gasps. Tucker’s there! Lily runs to Tucker and slaps him.

“What do you think you’re doing?!” Lily asks. “Don’t you dare hurt my sister!” She orders. Veronica walks to Lily.

“I’m the one who’s gonna whoop her ass, again.” Veronica says as she gets in Lily’s face.

“I’m not here to fight. I want this madness to end!” She says.

“You did it.” Tucker says.

“Did what?!”

“You know what you did to Marques.” Tucker aims his gun at Lily’s head and presses the trigger. Lily screams in fear.

“Tucker, stop!” Chelsea yells as her and Sasha reaches the port. “Don’t throw your life away like this!” She says.

“I don’t care about my life anymore… I never have.”

“So you’re gonna throw it all away like this? Tucker, THINK! You could DIE tonight! Let Lily go, she’ll pay for this some other way.” Chelsea says.

Lily takes this time and run to Eugene. They both hide somewhere.

“Where you Julian?! ANSWER ME!!!” Tucker screams.

“I’m right here.” Julian says as he walks behind Tucker, with his arms behind his back. “So you showed up.”

“Of course.”

Nora runs behind Julian.

“You stupid being, why didn’t you wait?!” She says. 

“Shut the fuck up.” Julian says.

“There you are.” Veronica says.

“Julian, please… If you get locked up, we’ll never be together again. Don’t you care about me at all?!” Sasha asks.

“Bo, ho.” Nora sarcastically says.

   Vance and Whitney are the last to arrive at the port.

“They’re actually going to kill each other!” Vance says.

Whitney looks at Lily and Eugene.

“Lily, Marques is okay.” She says.

“Thank God!” She says.

“Our plan was better anyway.” Eugene says.

“You get a life, fat ass.” Vance says.

   Whitney walks in between Julian and Nora and Tucker and Veronica. “Just, stop! Both of them! This is ridicules! Do you four even know what you’re fighting for?!”

“Yes. They ruined my face.” Nora says as she points to the horrible and ugly scars on her once beautiful and perfect face. “I’m not letting them again away this. Besides, Julian didn’t like Tucker anyway.”

“So you used him? You used Julian’s hate for Tucker for your own gain. Before all of this, Julian and Tucker didn’t hate each other. And before Sasha, they were best friends! We need to patch things up between them, not fight!” Whitney says.

Veronica looks at the ground. “This is stupid. I agree with her. There’s nothing to fight over.”

“Nothing? Nothing?! Do you see my face?! It’s ruined!” Nora complains.

“Do you ever shut up?” Veronica, Tucker and Julian says. Sasha walks to Julian and hugs him.

“Julian… I don’t want to lose you over dumb shit like this… Especially since it’s not your fault.” Sasha says. Everyone rolls her eyes.

“So…is it over?” Vance asks.

“Boo! This was dumb!” Eugene complains.

     Whitney grabs Julian and Tucker and pushes them together. “You two have some patching up to do. I know you won’t be best friends for a while, but take one step at a time.” Whitney says as she smiles.

Julian and Tucker are quiet, looking at each other straight in their eyes violently. 

“Please be friends!” Chelsea says with her fingers crossed.

Sasha is staring at the both of them, with fear in her eyes.

“…Well?” Vance asks.

Tucker and Julian drop their guns and hug each other.

“I miss you, man!” Julian says.

“Me too, bro!” Tucker says.

“Yay!” Chelsea says as she’s clapping and jumping up and down. Chelsea walks to Julian and Tucker. “As long as I’m around, you two are gonna be best friends soon and NO MORE FIGHTING!” Chelsea says as she giggles happily.

“Sick.” Nora says as in disgust.

“Phew!” Eugene says as he wipes the sweat off his face with his shirt. “This was too stressful for me. As of now, I’m officially quit spreading rumors!”

“I hear that. Give me five.” Lily says. Eugene gives Lily a “high five”.

Whitney hugs Vance. “We did it!” She says happily.

“Actually, you did.” Vance chuckles. Vance and kisses each other passionately on the lips.

“To make you feel comfortable, I’m gonna dumb Sasha. She’s too clingy anyway.” Julian says.

“WHAT?!” Sasha yells.

“I’m cool with that.” Tucker says.

Julian and Tucker walk to the now pissed off Sasha. “Sasha, you’re cut!” Julian says as he pretends he’s cutting something. Tucker and Julian bursts into laughter.

Sasha gasps. “I hate you both! I hope you both fucking fall off a cliff and die! Ugh! Julian, you just made the biggest mistake of your life. One Saturday, when you’re horny and masturbating, you’re gonna wish you had me.” Sasha says.

Everyone laughs with the exception of Nora. Who looks less then happy. Lily walks to her sister.

“Nora, you lost, get over it.” Lily says. Lily then punches Nora in her face with all her month. “And that’s for Marques!” She says.

Whitney was cuddling to Vance as he puts his arms around her. Sasha walks to Vance with a hopeful look in her eyes.

“Vance. I guess we’re both single, so…”

“Nuh-uh.” Vance says as he kisses Whitney. “I have a girlfriend. A real one this time.” He says as he and Whitney chuckles.

Sasha rolls her eyes. “Whatever, you’re gonna miss me too!” Sasha walks off.

“Leo left me… Oh well. He was such a punk. Time for me to find a real man that don’t work at a flower shop.” Veronica says as she lives the port.

“So, what now?” Whitney asks.

Vance smiles. “Oh, I think you know.” He says sexually as he winks. Whitney giggles. Vance turns around and Whitney jumps on his back. Vance gives Whitney a piggy-back ride out of the port, with everyone else following as the moon shines brightly on everyone.

~*THE END*~


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