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I'm pretty much going to throw you right in to the story because I'm at a lack of how I should begin it, and I would love any suggestions.
I want to take time to thank PhoenixSlayer and Fuu Hououji1 for their support (or lack there of) in helping me get this story up. Thanks.
One thing that could be kind of confusing is that wherever you see this sign * it means a person is thinking something. My computer won't keep the italic letters when I upload this so. if any of you know how to keep the italic tell me, I'm dying to know.
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Chapter One ~Lies
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"Two days, sir?! That's hardly enough time to get efficient equipment
let alone my men prepared! This battle wasn't expected to be for another
ten days!" Commander Satara (age 21: 5ft9") said as she punched the wall.
"I understand your Distress Commander Satara, but there is no excuse
for the situation of your unit. It's true that we predicted this battle to
be farther in the future, but you were still warned to be ready for
anything. Were you not?"
*What is he trying to get at?
Satara stared at the Commander-in-Chief, Jecht. He returned her glare
with blazing silver eyes. The tension in the room was unbearable and Satara
was the first to look away.
Jecht watched as her as her hair fell in front of her eyes concealing
the anger that danced across their green surface. He observed Satara's
clenched fist and the struggle to calm herself down enough to force the
reply, "Yes sir."
"Satara! This is it! This is the fight that could end the war! I need
unit 207 out there fighting and you know that!" Jecht saw the doubt that
played across Satara's face. *Shit! This isn't working! I need another
approach. "You know of course for whom I speak. And I'm sure you understand
that if you don't follow my orders, you will be charged with treason."
*Treason?!
Outside the conference tent the guard shifted uneasily, his mind racing.
*Jecht never calls rank on anyone. He even hates speaking in the emperor's
name. What makes Commander Satara so different that he does just that?
Dustin didn't like was wrong.
"Excuse ME!"
Dustin looked up. He hadn't realized that someone had approached him.
"Can I help you sir?"
"Yes actually you can. I was hoping to speak with Commander-in-Chief
Jecht, so if you could just step aside."There was a hint of charm in the
man's voice that made Dustin want to do whatever he said.
Dustin sized the man over. He was a dark looking character with
scraggly black hair. This man towered over Dustin's own 6ft2" and he had
very well defined muscles. As Dustin looked at the man he couldn't help but
think that something was wrong. But what? *The eyes! Dustin stared at the
man's eyes. *They , that's impossible! No one has that color eyes.
And they are, as black as black can be, and almost blacker.
Dustin began to get the feeling that the man could see right through him,
right into his soul. He began to move out of the way to let the man in but
then it hit him. He didn't like this man anymore then he liked the way
Jecht was acting. With that whatever hold the man had on him left and
Dustin manage to say, "I'm sorry sir, but Jecht is with Commander Satara at
the moment. If you would just wait a bit I'm sure." The man's eye's looked
confused for a moment but they were quickly replaced with anger.
"Maybe I wasn't clear enough. I need to speak to Jecht now!" The
man's voice lost all its charm and his eyes flashed dangerously.
Dustin was losing his temper. "I maybe you didn't understand me, sir.
The Commander-in-chief is busy with someone else at this time!"
"I don't care if the Emperor himself is in there! Let me through!"
Dustin never saw the punch that landed him in the stomach.
Treason.
Satara scowled.
She hated that word. It was because of that word that she lost some
of her finest soldiers. This word, this one word, changed everything. "Two
days sir?"
"Yeah."
Silence.
Jecht looked Satara over. She was just what this army needed. She
knows how to control her unit and she's a good planer. Sure, she sometimes
makes rash decisions, but then, who didn't? She's an excellent fighter and
she carried a weapon for every occasion. *Let's see now, two particle
blasters, three hidden knives, five grenades, and one energy sword. Not to
mention that she probably had some finger bombs handy. "Yes, she's
perfect."
"What was that?"
"Nothing." Satara mouthed a silent 'oh' to this.
".LET ME THROUGH!!!"
The tent flap flew open and the limp form of Dustin collapsed
forward, followed by a man that Satara recalled being at the Conference of
Commanders. Satara made as if to challenge the man, who was now standing in
front of Dustin's body, when Jecht waved her off. She looked at him
questionably, "Sir?"
"Ah, yes. Satara, this is Leon from the Tascawan Tribe. He's a... How
should I say this.a fighter for higher? He's working undercover for us to
intercept enemy information. He's the reason we know attack dates."
Leon reached over to shake Satara's hand. "It's a pleasure to meet
you, Commander Satara."
Satara made no move to shake Leon's hand. "Charmed, I'm sure." Then
she turned towards Jecht and said in a quite voice, "Are you sure we can
trust his, sir? I mean he is ." These words were spat with
disgust, "He's loyal to no one."
Dustin moaned.
Satara sauntered over to him, never taking her eyes off of Leon.
Leon, noticing that he was the center of Satara's attention, smiled at her.
Then, without flinching, he looked at Jecht. The two traded knowing
glances. Jecht was first to speak. "Satara, I need you to go to Crossroads
Hold and spread word of the upcoming attack. Afterwards you can prepare you
men." At this Leon opened his mouth as if to interrupt, but thought better
of it.
"Very well." Satara sighed. She was hoping to get some extra training
in with her unit but that didn't seem possible now. She helped Dustin to
his feet. She noted the way he was hunched over, how he was favoring his
stomached, and concluded that he had been 'gutted,' as the phrase went.
Then turning her frown upon Leon, she said, "I suggest that you watch who
you're attacking in the future, soldier, we wouldn't want someone to
mistake you for the enemy, now would we."
Leon winced at the cold apathy in Satara's voice, and then watched as
she stalked out of the tent with Dustin staggering behind. Leon turned to
face Jecht after Satara was gone. "I assume that I am to follow her after
our little discussion?"
Jecht nodded. "We can't afford to have her ruin this plan now. It's
true she would be a valuable addition to our mission but she walks a
dangerous line. I really hate wasting good material, but if worst comes to
worst, kill her."
Dustin had to jog to keep up with Satara's quick pace. He almost hit
Satara when she stopped abruptly in front of the camp for unit 207. "I have
a favor to ask you Dustin."
"Y...Yes?"
"In five minutes I want all of unit 207 assembled in front of my
tent." Satara gave no notice to the quizzical look Dustin was giving her.
As she walked off, Dustin shook his head and set to work on his task.
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Okay, that's the first chapter of "Back to the Shadows." I really hope you enjoyed it. I don't know when I'll get the second chapter up, but I'm telling you now if you read it the story will make a lot more sense. Please review so I have an idea about where my story stands. Thanks.