I-wish-I-were-dead
Just a little poem I wrote after a person I loved sadened me greatly for
basically no reason at all. Please be kind when reviewing. No flames
please! Oh yes if you read this please check out anything written by
Kurokumo_yume espically her songs. and please review.

Rain falling ,so, gently
like angelic tears
down to Earth.
I fall to the ground
just once more
defending what I love.
A cut
A bruise
What does it matter?
If it's all for you.
Walking down
an old path
into an ancient history filled graveyard.
I watch your face
just once more
before they lower it down.
I wanna jump down
down to where you are.
They begin filling it in.
I throw a single rose in
along with it
everything else good in my life
And begin walking once more
to an old apartment building.
Inside, under the bed
is where my destiny lies.
A shiny silver barrel
Should I pull the trigger?
No second thoughts
No regrets
No more pain
Only you.
I pull the trigger
and I see you smiling
In a sea of Crimson tears.
Owari
I know I'm a psycho ain't I? But please Review! Any constructive crictism
is welcome. Even though I know it would take a whole lot to make this
actually sound good!