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Make Believe
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A cute, short poem about being make believe. My nine year-old niece wrote this, so I'd appreciate some feedback. Thanks!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Words: 78 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 03-31-04 - id: 1567631
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This life of yours is a butterfly
As you think of me
You find me interesting
But I'm really not
'Cause I'm make believe

*A/N* Well, after I uploaded three of my ten year-old niece's poems, my
nine year-old niece decided to give poetry a shot. I thought it was pretty
decent for someone her age, so I told her I'd post it. Please tell me what
you think, okay? Thanks!
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