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Author: Always Writing
Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Reviews: 7 - Published: 04-05-04 - Updated: 04-05-04 - id:1571194
Okay, a little warning...implies sexual activity.  Don’t read if it’ll offend you.You Know, It’s Not That Great

People talk about it as though it’s the best thing on Earth,

And they laugh at those who start late,

But now I know the truth, and I’ve realised,

I know now, it’s not that great.

Maybe I chose the wrong guy,

The wrong time, and the wrong place,

Maybe it was all wrong, every last second of it,

How I wish I hadn’t taken part in that race.

If I could change the past, I would,

I’d much rather be sitting here, not crying,

My head hurts, my heart’s so bruised,

It seriously feels like I’m dying.

I can sit here in tears, feeling used by him,

My world’s spinning, my heart’s in a state,

I wish I could turn back the hands of time:

You know, it just wasn’t that great.

So my advice to those reading this so-called poem,

Never do what others want you to do,

You’ll end up hurting more than you ever thought possible,

And I just don’t want you hurting too.

-Carrie

A/N: I just hope it gives the message clearly.  And to those who know me: don’t worry, I’m fine, really.

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