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Hi, my names eddy not the greatest name ever invented
for a 66 year old man, I would just call myself Edward but, eddys on my
birth certificate, that's right I have to write that on everything I ever
signed in my life, not the greatest thing for a struggling writer. It never
occurred to me I could just not be good, I kept trying even thought about
everything I wrote was a maximum of 3 typed pages, I so badly wanted to
write a big novel but hey it never happened. What am I suppose to do kill
myself? No I wouldn't ever do that especially after my greatest sell
"Olivia Alligator Tango" which sold a whopping 6 copies, one was my mother
but anyway... What am I suppose to write now? About my love life? I'm not
married probly never will hey when your hair color screws up and you end up
looking like carrot top and you run around saying you're a 66 year old,
unemployed writer doesn't exactly make you a chick magnet. Then you find
those girls every once in a while who don't care, but they later get sucked
in by the crowd, okay that was in high school but some things you don't
forget, sunny was really great she was cool without trying witch is very
cool, in the end she had to leave me over a rumor, she may be the only
person I ever talked to about my dreams for a big novel. Wait am I making
this in to a gushy story? No I shouldn't wait maybe I should and then I can
make it over 3 pages. Well let's start at the beginning...
The class bell rang, I raced in after a fight with my
locker, sat down and pulled out my crumpled/stained biology homework, Mr.
seedy walked in with a girl by his side. He proceeded to introduce her as
Sunny Piole she just moved to Howard falls from Michigan. I glanced up at
her quickly and to my surprise she was looking right at me, you might think
we had some kind of lovey scene right there but really she was looking at
my homework with a look of disgust then she giggled when I tried to staple
it together only to find it had no corners. I turned my head away from her,
she was one of those people who was going to be popular which meant, by me
looking at her I could face a beating after school, I really really didn't
need that today. After all I had band practice after school and I simply
couldn't miss that. Maybe I should have given her a chance, maybe when she
talked to me I should have listened, she was automatically accepted into
'the group' when I finally got the guts to talk to her she opened her mouth
to say something and it was quickly pushed shut by one of her apparent
'friends' it took about a week before I shoved a note in her locker telling
her to meet me at Harold Johns after school I thought this would be a
pretty good place to meet her, nice little coffee shop, and the fact I was
working there and doubted she would show up helped too. So I came out of
the back from washing dishes getting ready to push my little cart around
and clear tables when I saw her in the corner booth, I walked by making
sure she wasn't here to meet her friends and hadn't noticed my note at all
when I heard "hey eddy! Over here" I turned like I was surprised because
I... was. I checked around to see if maybe it was a joke, turned over and
said "me?" and she sarcastically said "no the other eddy that leaves notes
in my locker." My head was sailing right out of the room and washing itself
in a puddle, well that's how it felt.
We sat there and talked for about 2 hours, of course the
whole time we were talking I had to run off and scrub tables real quick and
come back, and I probly spent my entire pay check on coffee for us, oh well
it was worth it by the end I asked her if she would want to go out to a
movie with me Saturday. I looked outside the window while she considered
the offer when I looked out I saw 'the group' I suddenly felt like I
couldn't breathe, like the air wasn't real or something. I know I shouldn't
have done this but I quickly asked her to hurry up, yes I probly looked
like a total jerk but, I was trying to dodge a beating. As I saw them
getting closer I told her I would be right back and went back to washing
tables. Just then they came in "hey bubbles, keep up the scrubbing!" said
Derek, he's just a popular kid no need to mention him at the moment. They
soon were surrounding sunny "great" I thought "my one chance and I blow It
by running away from a group of popular kids." Lets just say the next day
at school I avoided glances from everyone, I was so afraid that sunny had
spilled about me asking her out and I would become the laughing stock of
the school, but from the way everyone acted she hadn't told. Walking to
biology I saw her she looked unusually frustrated when she saw me she ran
towards me like I was a cheeseburger and she was a fat kid. Pretty soon she
was pulling me under the stairs and she only said one thing "YES" and ran
off to join her group which was sitting wide mouthed. Then I realized my
mouth was sitting wide open too. What a great surprise.