DeadSilentSaturn: yea, you're totally right. I was more into the emotions... I wanted this to be sad, cuz that's exactly how I felt. so yet again you're right. As for the message for the person... well first of, it's not a "he", it's a "she". It's my ex girlfriend.. and to be honest, she didn't say anything. We still love each other, but it's tough for both of us. We just can't be together, unfortunalty for my heart. Thanks SO MUCH for taking time to review my stuff! It means a lot to me :)