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Author: LiL Angel with Wings
Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Mystery - Reviews: 10 - Published: 05-24-04 - Updated: 05-19-05 - id:1618353
Authors note: Hey guys, this is my first piece of fiction, so please go easy on me. I hope you like it. Its kinda an exaggeration of one of the poems I wrote. I don’t want to name it till the end of the story because it will give the ending away, but I hope you like this. Please R and R!!

A Tragedy in Love

He held her tight as she leaving his house last night and gave her a long lingering kiss. He knew he’d see her in the morning, but he hated the parting good byes. Tomorrow is their two-year anniversary. They are planning on getting married September 3rd. A big beautiful glamorous wedding with all the trimmings. He is absolutely in love with her, to the point he’d die to make his beloved happy.

The reason they’re getting married on September 3rd is because that’s the day they realized they were meant for each other. The 3rd of every month is their special day and only brings greatness.

Tomorrow will be June 3rd, with tons of happening events. J and Phoebe will start their day together meeting for breakfast and then go on to tons of shopping. With their wedding around the corner, there is a lot they need to get in order.

"Hey, Good morning sweetie!"
"Good morning baby, did you get to the house ok?"
"Yes of course," she says while embracing him with a kiss.
"Our table’s ready, babe, let’s go sit. Phoebe follows J to the table and sits as he pulls her chair out. J takes the seat right across from her, for the better view of her sweet face.

Right away they begin talking about the days events. Preparing for a wedding is hard to do. Time is running short with only three months till the big day.

"So Pheebs, I gotta by Landon’s house to pick him up. He doesn’t have his car today, and he really needs to be with me to pick out the tuxedoes. What do you say we meet back at my house at two? That should give you and your girlfriends time to find yawl’s dresses, right?"
"Yeah J, that’s fine. But then we have to go together to the church to decide how to decorate it with all the flowers."
"Aww baby…..Why do I have to help with that? Can’t one of your girls help you do that?"
"No, you are because you love me. Plus we need to determine how many guests will fit in there. I want to be able to invite all of our friends."
"Ok. Ok. You win, I’ll go with you."
"Good boy. I always win. I love you", she says as she leans over the table to give him a kiss."
"Come on honey, lets go", J says taking her hand.
"Ok, bye, I’ll see ya at two at your house, right?"
"Right. Be careful babe, promise?"
"Of course I promise. I love you."
"I love you too."

"Landon! Its 2:30, where is she?" a frightened J screeches.
"Don’t worry man, she’ll be here. You know women; they’re always running late. Plus, she’s got all her friends with her."
"I know that man, but still. If she thought she would be this late, she would have called!"
"Well then…why don’t you call her?"
"Do you think I’m a dumbass? I already tired! It’s not working you stupid dumb fuck!"
"Chill man, she’ll be here. No need to get crunk. You worry to much."
"This is my wife, my baby, my love. What if there was an accident? What if she’s hurt? I know Phoebe better than you, and she’s never late!"
"Alright man, alright, chill out. Don’t bust a gut. Do you know any of the numbers for her friends?"
"Ummm…..Yeah I gotta’em in the other room. Let me go look. Stay by the phone so you can answer it right when it rings!"
"Alright J, it’ll be okay though. Just calm down a little."

As J goes to leave the living room there is a sudden knock at the door.

J stops could turkey and looks at Landon. Landon asks quivery," Would Pheebs knock?"
"No man, she wouldn’t."
"Well go answer it then! Hurry up!"

J gets to the door, slowly turning the knob and opens it. With a look of anger and confusion he freezes.

Authors after note: I am new at writing fiction, so I hoped you liked this. If you review, then I will continue on with the second chapter. Its almost ready and there is a shocking surprise that’s will not be what you expect. I’ll post it as soon as I get some feed back! Thanks!

LiL Angel with Wings
~ Dreamer to Fly ~



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