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Author: Adrian Clyde
Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Drama - Reviews: 22 - Published: 05-30-04 - Updated: 08-06-04 - id:1623038

 

(WARNING!!!!! THIS SERIES CAN BE PRETTY GRAPHIC AT TIMES SO DON’T COMPLAIN PLEASE!!!! HOWEVER, DON’T LET THAT STOP YOU FROM READING. ^_~)

(Before you begin reading, I just like to get a couple things across. One, this is script. I don’t know why no one likes script, but it’s a hell of a lot better then writing “she said, he said” over and over again. Also, I’d like to think of this more as a T.V. show then a story, and that’s how I’m treating this. I’ll give descriptions of the characters and the surrounds, but not their feelings because…well…on TV, that stuff isn’t described. You’re supposed to find that out on your own. ^_~ All in short, this series was created like a TV show and will be treated as one, which is why I use “episodes” rather then using “chapters”. So please, no complaints. DON’T LET THE SCRIPT STOP YOU FROM READING AND ENJOY!!!!!)

                                                                                                            EVE

                                                                                           EPISODE 1: THE RUINS

   It was late at night when two teens, a boy and a girl were looking for shelter. It was raining pretty hard and both of them were soaked.

BOY: “In there!” The boy yelled as he pointed to an old “mansion”. The mansion was actually an old, rusty temple. It hasn’t been used in years. The temple was huge and golden. There were Egyptian symbols all over it. The boy and the girl ran inside the temple.

GIRL: “Finally! Out of that rain!” The girl said as she dried her hair. Suddenly, the sound of a piece of metal falling on the floor was heard. “What was that?” The girl asked.

BOY: “I don’t know. Go check it out.”

GIRL: “Ah! Not by myself!” The boy sighed.

BOY: “Fine.”

    The boy and the girl went to check the sound. The temple had long, dark hallways. There were paintings of people getting eaten by demons and people being brutally tortured.

BOY: “I don’t see anything. Maybe it was just your imagination.” The boy turned around. However, the girl was gone. The boy had a puzzled look on his face. “Where did you go?” Suddenly, the boy heard a growl right behind him. The growl was horrible. It sounded a like a dying dog. The boy turned around and suddenly the thing jumped at him, first biting off his legs and all his other body parts until he finally got to his head. The boy screamed in pain as he was being eaten alive by the thing in the temple.

                                                                                                THE NEXT DAY

  It was a cloudy afternoon. It looked like it was going to storm at any minute. A young college freshman was in his home working out. He was African American. He was light skin and had long singles stopping pass his shoulders. His name is Gerald and he was lifting weights when someone rang his doorbell.

GERALD: “Hold up, hold up!” Gerald ran to the door and answered it. There stood a beautiful caramel skin African American girl. She had wavy black hair that stopped at her breast.  She was wearing a black jacket with a white shirt. Her skirt was short and tight. Her boots and her skirt were black.

GERALD: “What’s up, Alana?”

ALANA: “Nothin’.” Alana giggled. “I see you’re working out those abs.” She giggled squeezed his nipples. “You and your sexy sweaty body.” Gerald chuckled.

  Alana walked in his apartment and Gerald closed the door behind her. Gerald started to wipe his face with a white towel.

ALANA: “Gerald, what did the professor talk about today? Got any notes? I know you do. Let me see ‘em.”

GERALD: “Yeah, I got notes. Alana, you really do need to start coming to class. You’re gonna get kicked out.”

ALANA: “Boy, you know I got too many things that I value more then college” Alana sat down on the couch in front of the television and crossed her legs. “If I get kicked out, so what? It’s not like I’m payin’ for it.” Alana started looking at her nails. Gerald sat next to her.

GERALD: “Weeellll, since you don’t care, then I guess you don’t need my notes.” Alana hit Gerald.

ALANA: “Don’t play with me!” Gerald got up and opened his book bag. He took out ten pages of notes and gave it to Alana. “Uh….” Alana gave the notes back to Gerald. “This can wait. Anyway, I came here for something else, too.”

GERALD: “What?”

ALANA: “Listen, Gerald. Don’t get mad, okay?”

GERALD: “Okay… I won’t. What is this about?”

ALANA: “Deacon-----!” Gerald cut Alana off.

GERALD: “God, Alana! You know I don’t like him!”

ALANA: “Yeah, but you don’t got to be yelling at me though. Anyway, Deacon, yes, DEACON wants to show us something. Foxx, Raquel, Esten and, Danielle’s gonna be there too.” Gerald raised an eyebrow.

GERALD: “Danielle?”

ALANA: “Yeah…her… So let’s go!” Alana paused. “Oh, before we go, take a shower cuz you smell like sweat and that’s nasty.”

   A few hours, Deacon, Foxx, Raquel, Danielle and Esten were in a field waiting for Gerald and Alana to show up.

DANIELLE: “Where are they? My legs are tired!” Danielle was a cute girl. She was brown skin and had long dark brown hair coming down her back. The end of her hair was dyed light brown. She was wearing a light blue tank top and white crepes.

RAQUEL: “For real.” Raquel was amazingly beautiful, but pretty short. She was African American and light skin. Her hair stops at her shoulders. Her hair color is very unique and it stands out. It’s mostly silky brown, but there’s lots of red and a little bit of light brown highlights. She was wearing a denim jacket. Her shirt was black. She also wore blue jeans with black heels.

FOXX: “Is that them?” Foxx pointed at two people walking down a hill. Foxx was a pretty boy, much like Gerald. He had dreadlocks that stops at his shoulders. He was wearing a red shirt and black jeans. His shoes were black. He was light brown skin. Alana ran to everyone and Gerald wasn’t far behind.

ALANA: “Heeey y’all! I know. I was deeply missed.”

DEACON: “Nobody missed you.” Deacon has a rough and mean face. He is pretty muscular and very dark skin. He is wearing a black hoodie with black shoes and jeans.

GERALD: “So, what are we here for?” Gerald was wearing a black flight jack with a blue south pole shirt underneath it. His jeans are dark blue and his shoes are black. Raquel shrugged.

RAQUEL: “To look around some house.”

DANIELLE: “Well, that’s boring.” Foxx chuckled.

FOXX: “Deacon wants to ‘show’ us something. I bet it’s something dumb.”

RAQUEL: “For real. Like when we were young, he always showed us dumb stuff.”

DEACON: “Raquel, shut up. I bet you don’t even remember what I showed y’all.”

RAQUEL: “Yeah, I do. And you shut up!” Esten laughed.

ESTEN: “You guys are funny!!!” Esten was a very loud person. He had short hair and was brown skin. He was wearing a white shirt and blue jeans. His shoes were white and blue. He was pretty unattractive.

EVERYONE: “Shut up, Esten!”

ESTEN: “O-Okay!” Esten chuckled. Alana rolled her eyes.

ALANA: “Why is he here?!”

DANIELLE: “He followed us. No one really wants him here though.” Gerald walked to Danielle.

GERALD: “What’s up?” Danielle smiled.

DANIELLE: “Nothing.”

ALANA: “…Excuse me while I go throw up.”

ESTEN: “So let’s go in, let’s go in!” Everyone walked towards the temple until they heard a voice.

????: “Don’t go in there!” Everyone faced the guy. The guy was Caucasian. His silky hair was medium length and blood red. His shirt and shoes were black and his pants are red. 

DEACON: “Who the hell are you?”

RAQUEL: “Hey… Ain’t that Allen? That gothic boy.”

ALLEN: “Why the hell are you going in that temple? Don’t you know two people died in there last night?” Danielle gasped.

DANIELLE: “Are you serious?”

DEACON: “Yeah, it was in the news. So the hell what.”

ESTEN: “Yeah, who cares?!”

GERALD: “I didn’t know about that… We shouldn’t be going in there then. The killer could still be in there.”

DEACON: “If he is, I’ll smoke his ass!”

ALANA: “Oh God. Please, stop.”

ALLEN: “I know what really killed those guys. The killer wasn’t even human.” Foxx burst into laughter.

FOXX: “So what killed them? A monster?” Foxx continued laugher. “This clown’s a joke.”

ALLEN: “Call me what you want, but I’m saving your ass. DON’T go in there! If you do, the thing will kill you.”

RAQUEL: “What’s the big deal? It’s just a house.” Raquel pointed at the temple. “See? Just a regular house.” Raquel walked in ahead of everyone. Everyone quickly followed her.

ALLEN: “Don’t go in there!” Allen ran to the others.

                                                                                             INSIDE THE TEMPLE

      The temple was pretty large and dark. After Allen walked in, the lights came on, revealing the beautiful gold all around the temple.

DANIELLE: “This is so pretty!”

ALLEN: “Great, I’m going to die because of you.”

ESTEN: “No one told you to come in here, man!”

ALANA: “No one told you to come here.”

GERALD: “What are we looking for?”

FOXX: “Lost treasure.” Foxx said being sarcastic.

DEACON: “As y’all know, I’m broke.”

ALANA: “We can tell that by looking at you.”

DEACON: “Shut up! Anyway, if we kill the killer, we’ll get paid $10,000! I’ll take 90%, and y’all can split the rest.”

ESTEN: “That’s not fair!”

ALLEN: “You’re wasting your time.”

RAQUEL: “Fine. I’m not helping then!”

GERALD: “That’s wrong. How about we all get an even amount.”

DEACON: “You don’t count, Gerald. I’m still getting’ most of the money, but y’all can have more then 10%.”

RAQUEL: “We better.” Everyone went their own separate ways.

                                                                                UPSTAIRS, DARK GOLDEN HALLWAY

GERALD: “I heard about your mother, Danielle. How are you holdin’ up?”

DANIELLE: “Pretty good. It still hurts sometimes, but I’m okay. Thanks for asking. Everyone acts like they don’t care about me. But if it was Alana, Raquel or Deacon, everyone would be feeling all sad crying and shit.”

GERALD: “I see. They care about you, Danielle. We all do. If they didn’t, they wouldn’t want you around. Like Esten.” Danielle giggled.

                                                                                            FIRST FLOOR, HALLWAY

   Foxx and Raquel were playing around. Foxx was trying touch all over Raquel and she would just giggle.

RAQUEL: “Stop it!” She said giggling.

FOXX: “Why? You know it feel good.”

RAQUEL: “That’s what you think, ‘Foxx’.” She said teasing his name.

FOXX: “Why do you gotta make fun of my name?”

RAQUEL: “Cuz.”

FOXX: “Cuz…what?” Foxx slapped Raquel’s butt. Raquel screamed and laughed.

RAQUEL: “Ow.”

  Foxx wrapped his arms around Raquel and started sucking her neck. Raquel moaned and turned around. She pushed Foxx to the wall and started kissing him. Deep, down in that same hallway, someone was watching them…

    In another hallway, Allen and Esten were looking for the killer person.

ESTEN: “Man, the killer ran away! We’re not gonna get any money!”

ALLEN: “The killer is not even human. It’s a beast.”

ESTEN: “You’re weird.”

ALLEN: “No, I’m just right. We need to get out of here. I’m telling you, there’s gonna be serious consequences.”

ESTEN: “Then go! I’m tryna get paid!” Allen sighed.

ALLEN: “Idiot…”

     A few hours later, everyone met back at the large golden room.

DEACON: “What did y’all find?”

DANIELLE: “Me and Gerald didn’t find anything. Did you and Alana find something?” Alana shook her head.

ALLEN: “I told you, you were wasting your time.”

GERALD: “Where’s Foxx and Raquel?”

    Foxx and Raquel came to the room. Raquel was combing her hair and Foxx put his shirt back on. Alana was shaking her hair.

ALANA: “Eh, eh, eh. Nasty, dirty and triflin’.”

DANIELLE: “Ew…here?” Raquel giggled.

ALLEN: “Did you two find anything? I already know you didn’t.”

FOXX: “Huh?” Raquel giggled. “Oh. Naw, dog.” Foxx said.

DEACON: “DAMMIT!” Everyone faced Deacon.

ESTEN: “Damn. What pissed you off?”

DEACON: “THIS!”

 The room started to sparkle.

GERALD: “What the hell…?” The room started getting lighter. Everyone ran to the door, but it won’t open.

ESTEN: “We’re gonna die!”

ALLEN: “I told you!”

  Suddenly, a pretty blonde girl ran to everyone screaming help. As soon as she came, a bright light flashed and knocked out everyone.

                                                                       HOURS LATER. GRASSFIELD OUTSIDE THE TEMPLE

           Esten was the first to wake up.

ESTEN: “Oh my God! They’re dead!” Allen woke up second. Everyone else woke up moments later.

DANIELLE: “Outside? How did we get here?” Alana screamed.

ALANA: “My shirt! It’s green!” She began crying.

GERALD: “Looks like that was a bust.” Everyone looked at the blonde girl.

RAQUEL: “Where did she come from?”

ALLEN: “…I don’t like her.” The blonde girl woke up.

BLONDE GIRL: “We’re alive!” “Where are my manners? I’m Valca. I’ve been trapped here for so long! I’m finally free!”

FOXX: “Okay…” Allen was staring at Valca long and hard. He knows something about her.

VALCA: “….” ‘Why he is observing me?” She thought to herself.

GERALD: “I guess we go home now.” Everyone walked ahead. Allen and Valca stayed behind.

ALLEN: “What are you?”

VALCA: “What do you mean?”

ALLEN: “Don’t play dumb, Valca. You weren’t trapped there. You live there.”

VALCA: “I don’t know what you mean. I-I’m gonna go!” Valca ran off.

  That night, Esten was sleeping when something suddenly woke him up. “Esten… Esten…” A pretty female voice spoke. Suddenly, Esten was in front of the temple. “Come in Esten…” Spoke the voice again. Not really “there”, Esten followed the voice into the temple. Esten was in the middle of the large room in the Temple. Suddenly, a nude blonde woman wearing see-through robe walked in the room. “In here…” The woman softly spoke. The woman disappeared. Suddenly, a giant eyeball attacked Esten with one of its tentacles. It wrapped Esten around with its tentacles as it opened its eyeball. There were teeth all over it’s horrible, disgusting, mouth/eye. Esten screamed for his life as he went closer and closer to the teeth filled monster. The monster began eating Esten. When Esten was nothing more then just bones, the monster became an eyeball again. Its body slowly started to regain form. Another eye and bloody face shape was formed.

EYEBALL: “Thank you, Valca.”

~*End*~

AUTHOR’S NOTES: Thanks for reading this brand new series! There will be a weekly episode. I hope you liked this episode. Tell me what you think. Good and bad reviews are welcome. However, if there’s something that you don’t like, please tell me so I can fix it. Thanks and check again next Friday. Please stick with this series. I promise, it will get MUCH better as it goes along.

~*Crazy Baiko*~


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