(WARNING!!!!! THIS SERIES CAN BE PRETTY GRAPHIC AT TIMES SO DON’T COMPLAIN PLEASE!!!! HOWEVER, DON’T LET THAT STOP YOU FROM READING. ^_~)

                                                                                                                  EVE

                                                                                                     EPISODE 10: HOME

                                                                                                         SERIES FINALE

   (Meanwhile, in the golden temple, Eve is looking at the huge, red, empty wall in front of her. Valca walks to Eve.)

VALCA: “Eve?”

EVE: (Angry) “What?”

VALCA: “Do you really want to go back there?”

EVE: (Turns around and looks at Valca in disgust) “Of course… You’re infected!”

VALCA: (Confused) “What?”

EVE: “You’re speaking with your heart! Yuck!” (Faces the wall behind her) “We’re going and that’s that.”

VALCA: “…So, when are you going to open the portal?”

EVE: “Tonight. First, I need a sacrifice. A girl.”

VALCA: “Oh…”

EVE: (Turns around and smiles at Valca) “Yes, a girl.”

VALCA: “Oh… W-Well I’ll get you one.”

EVE: “No need. I’ll fetch her myself. It has to be one of those girls that went in the temple.”

    (Valca sighs in relief.)

EVE: “I think I should be getting her right now. After all, the ritual will take a lot of time.”

VALCA: “Well… Good luck!” (Doesn’t mean it)

EVE: “Aw… How sweet. Thank you Valca.”

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   (Deacon, Alana and Danielle are walking to Danielle’s house. It’s pretty hot outside and the sun is shining brightly.)

DANIELLE: “How long has it been?”

ALANA: “A week.”

DANIELLE: “Seems longer.”

DEACON: “I can’t believe they’re all gone.”

ALANA: “Me too.” (Sighs)

DEACON: “I think Alana’s going to die next.”

ALANA: “What?! Don’t play with me!”

DANIELLE: (Giggles) “Why would you say that?”

DEACON: “Because… I’m always right about these things. After Alana, it’s going to be Danielle and I’m gonna be the survivor.”

ALANA: “Boy, please.”

DANIELLE: “We shouldn’t joke about stuff like that. It could really happen.”

ALANA: “Suck it up, man-stealer. We’re just joking around because we could all get our heads chopped off today.”

DANIELLE: “Eww…”

DEACON: “Shit, I’m not!”

ALANA: “Eh. You’ll probably be the first one.”

   (Deacon, Alana and Danielle reach Danielle’s house. Danielle waves good-bye to them as she walks to her doorstep. Danielle takes out her keys and opens her door.)

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  (Danielle walks in her house and closes her door. Her living room is completely dark. Danielle throws her keys on the floor and sits on the couch. She begins crying. She looks over to her left and sees several pictures on her stand by the couch. She takes the middle picture from the stand and begins looking it. The longer she looks at it, the sadder she gets. The picture Danielle is looking at is a picture of her, Gerald, Alana, Foxx, Raquel and Deacon. Danielle cries and puts the picture down.)

DANIELLE: “Why God…why?!”

 (Suddenly, a sound is heard at Danielle’s door. She turns to the door and sees Eve standing there. Danielle gasps and quickly gets off the couch. Eve smiles and walks towards her.)

DANIELLE: “What do you want?!”

EVE: “You, my dear.”

DANIELLE: “Why won’t you just leave us alone?!”

EVE: “I would, honey, but I can’t. I need you.”

DANIELLE: “For what?!”

EVE: “You’ll see.”

  (Eve grabs Danielle. Suddenly, both of them disappear.)

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   (Hours later, Eve returns to the golden room, carrying the unconscious Danielle with her. Valca looks sad. Eve chains Danielle to the large golden wall.)

EVE: (Smiles) It will soon be complete!”

VALCA: (Nods sadly) “Yeah… I’m hungry, I’m going to eat something.”

EVE: “Be back soon, Valca.”

VALCA: “I will.” (Valca disappears.)

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   (That night, Allen is in his apartment looking through his cabinets. Someone appears behind him. Allen turns around.)

ALLEN: “Ah! Shit, Valca! What are you doing here now?”

VALCA: “Allen, don’t be scared… It’s only me.”

ALLEN: (Sarcastic) “Gee, why wouldn’t I be? After all, you only ate my friends.”

VALCA: “I want to help you.”

ALLEN: (Raises eyebrow) “Huh?”

VALCA: “I don’t want Eve to create the portal to go back our world. The truth, is I like it here!”

ALLEN: “What for? Is the food good?”

VALCA: “Stop being like this, Allen! Do you want my help or not?”

ALLEN: “How can I trust someone who killed most my friends and tormented my father thirty years old?”

VALCA:  “Did I ever try to kill you?” (Allen doesn’t answer) “Thought so. Come with me to the temple, leave the other two out of this.”

ALLEN: “Why?”

VALCA: “Do you want them to get killed? They’re only human.”

ALLEN: “No… But we can’t go there alone. Last I checked, I was only human too.”  

VALCA: “Fine, if you want…”

ALLEN: “No, I know what you mean. Let’s go.”

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  (Alana is walking down the street. She walks over to Danielle’s house and knocks on her door. There’s no answer. Alana continues to knock on Danielle’s door.)

ALANA: “Danielle! Are you in there?”

  (No one answers. Danielle looks through Danielle’s window. She doesn’t see anything. Alana turns around and feels something behind her. She screams.)

ALANA: “Deacon!”

DEACON: “My bad, girl! Damn. Calm down.”

ALANA: “Don’t sneak up behind me like that! You know there isn’t much of a difference between you and the ugly monsters.”

DEACON: “What’s that supposed to mean?!”

ALANA: “Figure it out.” (Deacon raises an eyebrow and Alana sighs.) “Danielle’s not home. I hope that bitch Eve didn’t get her…”

DEACON: “You know what, I’m done with this. I’m gonna take out my M16s and blow those bitches up!”

ALANA: “Oh my God, you are such a clown. Just stop it.”

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  (Meanwhile, Danielle wakes up. She screams once she notices that she’s chained to the wall. Eve is sitting down on the floor chanting a ritual in Latin. Danielle screams.)

DANIELLE: (Sobbing) “HELP!!!”

  (Eve is ignoring her, Danielle continues to scream for help.)

DANIELLE: “Please, just let me go! I didn’t do anything to deserve this!”

   (Eve stops chanting and glares at Danielle. Danielle stops talking and begins crying. Eve continues to chant the ritual again. Moments, Valca and Allen rushes in the room. Allen is carrying his shotgun.)

DANIELLE: (Perks up) “Allen!”

   (Eve gets up and turns around.)

EVE: “What is he doing here?!”

VALCA: “I’m sorry, Eve, but I don’t want to go back! This world is better!”

EVE: “Valca… You… You betrayed me?”

VALCA: (Tears comes down her eyes) “I’m sorry… I didn’t want to…but I didn’t want to go back. I love it here.”

DANIELLE: “Help me!”

EVE: “I don’t believe this. Valca… Don’t you love me?”

   (Valca cries, Allen runs to the chains. He shoots the chains off of Danielle. Danielle runs and hugs him. Eve turns around)

EVE: “NOOO!!!!!!!!” (Turns around and glares at Valca) “I can’t believe you did this.”

VALCA: “Please forgive me, Eve! W-We can both be happy here!”

EVE: (Slowly walks to Valca) “I don’t WANT to be happy here. You betrayed me. Remember what I do to dirty, filthy, lairs?”

VALCA: “I’m not a human, you can’t kill me easily!”

EVE: “Who says I want to kill you?”

   (Eve picks Valca up by her neck. Allen and Danielle attempts to run out of the room, but a golden wall appear on the door.)

ALLEN: “Damn!”

DANIELLE: “What are we going to do?”

EVE: “Love this world so much? Then you’ll be happy to watch me destroy it.”

   (The purple knife that was on the floor floats. With the arm she’s not using, Eve points over to Danielle and the knife stabs Danielle in her stomach. Danielle screams loudly and falls to the ground. Valca screams loudly. A look of shock appears on Allen’s face.)

ALLEN: (Kneels down) “Danielle, Danielle wake up!”

DANIELLE: (Crying) “It…hurts!”

ALLEN: “Don’t say anything. Keep your house open!” (Allen looks at Eve with rage) “Why her, Eve?! WHY?!”

EVE: “It didn’t have to be only her, it could have been any one of you.”

ALLEN: “If you wanted to hurt Valca… You should have killed me.”

EVE: “Who said I wasn’t?”

VALCA: “Allen, run!”

  (Danielle coughs out some blood. Allen kneels down to her. Danielle stops breathing and dies. Eve smiles. Suddenly, a black hole appears on the large golden wall in the back of them.)

EVE: “Time to go home.”

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  (Meanwhile, Alana and Deacon are still waiting on Danielle’s porch making fun of each other. Suddenly, the sky gets dark, almost completely black.)

ALANA: “What is going on?”

DEACON: “Shiiit, I’m about to go home.”

ALANA: “Me too…”

  (Deacon and Danielle begin to leave Danielle’s house. Alana stops and sniffs the air.)

ALANA: “Ew. Do you smell that Deacon?”

DEACON: “Yeah… I think it’s you.”

ALANA: “No, how about it’s your breath.”

  (There’s a bright light in the sky. Suddenly, an electrical storm begins. The lighting is very sharp. Alana screams. Alana and Deacon attempts to run inside Danielle’s house when two demons grab them from behind.)

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   (Back at the room, Eve smiles.)

EVE: “It’s been fun, but I gotta run.”

   (Eve breaks Valca’s neck and throws her body on the floor. She walks to the portal. With rage in his eyes, Allen picks up the knife that had killed Danielle.)

ALLEN: “No more…”

   (Allen runs to Eve. Eve turns around gasps. Allen deeply stabs Eve and they both fall in the portal. The black hole closes and disappears.)

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  (Meanwhile, at Danielle’s house, Alana and Deacon struggles to break free. The demons behind them suddenly disappear. The sky clears up and the storm stops.)

ALANA: “…Okay… What was that?”

DEACON: “I don’t know, but I’m not stayin’ to find out!”

ALANA: “Yeah.”

  (Deacon and Alana run away in opposite directions.)

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   (Two weeks later. It’s night outside and Deacon finally arrives at his apartment. He throws his book bag on the ground and walks to his phone to see who called. The person who called was Alana.)

DEACON: “Damn… Where the hell are Danielle and Allen?”

   (Deacon walks to his couch. He sits down his couch and turns on the television with his remote.)

DEACON: “What’s going on in the world today?”

MILA: “Hello, this is Mila Gomez and you’re watching the news at ten. The temple that’s over a hundred years old was found collapsed this morning at seven thirty A.M. Two nearly decayed bodies were found. The bodies were identified as Danielle Johnson and an unidentified blonde woman. Several tastes were run through the bodies. Both women have been dead for over two weeks. Danielle Johnson died from a stab wound and the blonde woman died from a broken neck. Doctors believe that the blonde woman may have been deformed.”

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   (Meanwhile, Alana have been watching the news from her room. She puts her hand to her mouth and gasps.)

ALANA: “No… No…” (Alana bursts into tears.)

   (Meanwhile, at Deacon’s apartment, Deacon’s in shock.)

DEACON: “She’s… Died…”

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  (It’s been ten minutes. Alana is crying pretty hard. Someone knocks on her door. Crying, Alana walks to her door and answers it. It’s Deacon.)

ALANA: “Deacon…”

DEACON: “I know, I heard…”

ALANA: (Hugs Deacon) “Danielle died!” (She cries some more. Alana stops hugging Deacon) “But where’s Allen?”

DEACON: “I don’t know. Either he went with Eve, or…”

ALANA: “Or he saved us. He told us that she wanted to destroy the world, but we’re still here and Valca’s dead.” (Smiles) “Allen is our hero.”

DEACON: “Yeah, but if I was there----”

ALANA: (Cuts Deacon off) “Shut up.”

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  (One year later. Alana is living in an actual house. The television is on and the news is playing. Alana is sweeping the floor.)

MILA: “It’s now been a year since the brutal series of deaths that claimed a total of ten victims. Last year, the killer was believed to be living in an old temple. When the temple collapsed a year ago, the murders stopped. The killer was never caught. Now on to our next report…”

  (Someone rings Alana’s doorbell. She runs to her door and answer’s the door.)

ALANA: “Heeeey, baby!” (Alana hugs and kisses her man, who is no one other then Deacon.)

DEACON: “What’s up?”

ALANA: “Just cleaning as usual. How was your day? Learn anything?”

DEACON: (Teasing) “What do you think?”

ALANA: “Yeah… Eh. Oh, there’s something I got to tell you.”

DEACON: “What?”
ALANA: (Happy) “I’m pregnant!”

DEACON: “…Say that?”

~*The End*~

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AUTHOR’S NOTES: That’s it! This is the last episode. I hope it wasn’t a bad one. If there a lot of errors, I’m sorry, but I REALLY didn’t feel like proofread this. I’M SO HAPPY! I’m FINALLY DONE with this thing! Anyway, I shall spend my final Author’s Note with you all revealing some Instant Eye truths. Btw, this is quite lengthy.

1) For now on, I’m changing “Instant Eye” into “Eve”. It would make more sense that way.

2) The idea for Instant Eye trails back to the fourth grade in 1997. After I saw the Parasite Eve commercial, I was like “I WANT THAT GAME!!!” Then, I say a commercial for an N64 game called “Forsaken”. So then, I was thinking of an idea for a comic book. There were sooooo many titles before this one. There was Parasite Eye,  Parasic Eye, Instant Eve, and finally Instant Eye.

3) There were two parts to Instant Eye originally drawn. The first one, Instant Eye 1, was more fantasy. It was about a guy named Jason and a prissy boy named Morgan who went in the temple to seek shelter from the thunderstorm. Jason touched a golden fish in the temple and that’s when the trouble started. A giant eyeball appeared killing Jason, Morgan escaped. The eye killed everyone who touched the golden fish, who later turned out to be Valca. The main character(I forgot his name), was shopping with his best friend Pollen when Morgan approaches them with the newspaper article about what he went through. The article was actually a joke, making fun of Morgan about how crazy he was for thinking an eyeball killed his friend. Morgan quickly changes the subject to him going on a dating show, and that the main character doesn’t have the guts to go to the game show. Well, he and Pollen went anyway. That’s when a whore named Valca tried to kill Morgan until they were saved a man(I forgot his name too). The main character, Pollen, Morgan and the man tries to escape, but they find themselves in a forest that wasn’t there before. Valca finds them and kills the man, and separates everyone else. The main character becomes a crotic and fights to get home. Also, to prevent Eve from finding her body back. Instant Eye was obviously fantasy. The characters in that one were the main one, Pollen, Morgan, Etha, Conra, Some evil guy, a guy whose name began with a “Z”, Valca and Eve. Valca was a pretty minor character and she mostly slept around.

4) The sequel, Instant Eye 2, I drew in the 7th grade. It is almost exactly like this one. The only difference is the characters. There were five main characters. The storyline was similar as well. The main character Gary(who can be found in Tarot Cards), was talked into going in the temple by his best friend Macy. Lizzy and Zack dares Gary to in the temple because they think he’s scared. Allen, who appears out of no where, tells them not to. Not taking him seriously, everyone goes in anyway, marking themselves by death.

5) Out of the two Instant Eyes, I obviously choose to use Instant Eye 2.

6) The personalities were in both versions are similar. Gary is like Gerald, Lizzy is a mixture of Alana and Raquel, and Jack is exactly like Deacon. I even reused Allen!

7) In both versions, Valca was trying to help Eve get her body back.

8) In both versions, Eve regained her body halfway through the series.

9) None of the Instant Eyes were ever completed. I lost Instant Eye 1 over my cousins house before I could finish it… I was highly pissed about that. I got bored with Instant Eye 2 so I gave up on it. I still have Instant Eye 2, although I’m missing a couple pages.

10) The main characters in Instant Eye 2 are Gary, Macy, Lizzy, Zack and Allen.

11) Even on the original Instant Eye 2, Valca favored Allen the most and talked to him in dreams, rather then in person.

12) The characters never found out Valca’s true agenda, although Allen constantly told them the she was a demon.

13) Allen was Morgan’s nephew, so that’s how he figured out about Valca and the temple.

Now on to this version of Instant Eye. :p

1) The two main characters are Gerald and Danielle… Although they both died.

2) Raquel and Danielle are based off two girls I had a crush on. Danielle is actually a good friend of mine, but she has a boyfriend. Although, she does know I like her. Raquel, on the hand, doesn’t know. Raquel looks better than Danielle. lol. They both are cute, though.

3) Deacon’s original was Ray, who can also be found in Tarot Cards.

4) When I first started this, I had another order of how the characters will die. The order was like this: Foxx, Alana, Deacon, Raquel and Allen, leaving Gerald and Danielle the survivors.

5) After finding out that a lot of my friends liked Alana, I decided to switch her death with Raquel. She was still planned to die.

6) The two survivors of this were not intended AT ALL.

7) Esten, Kinon and Sylvie were not original characters, hence the reason why they’re not on the list. I only put them in the series so that I wouldn’t have to kill the main characters too early.

8) I originally planned to change Eve’s name to Eva, but decided not to.

9) I was happy when I killed Gerald. lol.

10) My friend Greg inspired me to write Instant Eye. He was writing a script of his own, so I decided to write one too…although I had just got finished from writing another script called “Selbery 2”.

11) Instant Eye was actually put up on the site a week earlier then it did, but no one reviewed it so I erased it and put it back up every single day until someone reviewed it. I did the same thing with Henshin Oni, INVASION and In Ravenville.

That’s all, folks! If you want, you can read my other stuff too, which most of you are doing anyway. lol. For the last time;

Holla.

~*Crazy Baiko*~