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Author: HeavyMetalMaiden
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/General - Reviews: 1 - Published: 06-04-04 - Updated: 06-04-04 - id:1628363
My "brilliant" English teacher had us all sit in a "harmony circle" and give strictly praise to one another on our chosen selection of writing. The following are the reviews I received from my alternative school classmates (I love these kids)..

"A strong vivid picture was presented through the whole piece." -Scott (Class of 2004)

"That's really really good I like the way you can write from a different view, that's really cool. You could write books. Your writing is deep and I like that." -Chelsea (would be Class of 2005, drop out)

"I was confused at first with the sexuality. I liked the way you described the setting, characters." -Robert (Class of 2005)

"Your use of vivid sensory details and heart-felt dialogue are the strong points of your story." -Mrs. Agee (goddamn her)

"Good word choice. You are an awesome writer! Good description too. (" -Blaire (Class of 2005)

"That was a bad ass paper, you're a good writer, the story flows well too." -Bongo (Class of 2004)

"Great story loved the description and how it relates to every day life. You're a great writer, just thought you should know that" -Emily (Class of 2005)

"Sounds straight out of a novel, thought it was a lesbo story the whole time though, but yea that was really good writing." -J.J. (Class of 2005) *thanks J.J.*

*story written: 2/23/04*



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