
one of those 'hip', 'modernized', 'americanized' kind of haikus. kind of works out to 5-7-7. [shrug]
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Angst - Words: 41 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 06-08-04 - id: 1631888
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one of those 'hip' american haikus :P i tried to think of ways to make it longer, but i always came back to thes lines.
broken
there is so much
ugliness in this world
that makes me want to break it
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