All She Wanted
"Ugh.." 17 year old Hannah McCloud groaned when she heard her alarm
go off. She opened one hazel colored eye, brushed away the strand of dirty
blonde hair that had fell in front of her face, and peeped at the red
writing. 7:00am. Enough time to take a shower before her twin brother,
Ryan, and get ready for school. She slowly dragged her 5"6 body up from her
very comfortable bed and stalked out to the bathroom.
Twenty minutes later a groggily Ryan knocked on the bathroom door.
"Hannah! Hurry up!"
"Just a second!" She called back.
Ryan stood at the door patiently, slouching slightly, not standing to
his full 6 feet. His short dirty blond hair was completely messed up and
A couple seconds later, the bathroom door opened and a whole bunch of
hot steam followed. Then came Hannah, her body and hair wrapped in a dark
purple towel. "There. All done."
"Finally." Ryan replied. "Think you used enough hot water sis?" He
gave his sister a small smile before walking into the bathroom, shutting
the door behind him.
Half an hour later, both teenagers were downstairs. Ryan grabbed his
backpack and was just about out the door when Hannah asked, "Ryan, can you
give Katie and I a ride to school today? Katie's car is in the shop."
Ryan hesitated before answering. "Yeah sure. We gotta pick up Josh
At the sound of Ryan mentioning his best friends name, Josh, Hannah
smiled and felt her heart start to beat faster. "Okay." She replied while
grabbing her backpack and following Ryan out the door.
A couple minutes later, Ryan's blue BMW, pulled up in front of Katie's
house. "Just honk the horn and she'll come out." Hannah told Ryan. So he
Katie came out and started towards the car. Her long chestnut brown
hair was up in a loose ponytail that swayed from side to side with every
step she took. She had a huge grin spread across her face as she came
closer to the vehicle. As the 5"8 girl slid into the backseat where Hannah
sat, her brown eyes twinkled with happiness when she saw Ryan.
"Hey girl." Hannah greeted Katie.
"Hey Hannah. Hey Ryan." Katie returned.
"Hey." He replied.
"Look at my new shirt Katie!" Hannah exclaimed.
Katie looked. "Ooo! That's such a nice blue color! Where did you get
it? How much? I want one in purple!"
Hannah laughed. "I got it from Stitches. 25% off!"
"Wow! Okay we have major shopping to do." Katie and Hannah giggled
while up front; Ryan shook his head while grinning.
Soon they pulled up in front of Josh's house. Again, Ryan honked his
Josh came out all but smiling. He looked like he didn't get any sleep
and his green eyes that were always full of happiness, now contained only
sadness and grief.
He opened the passenger door and slid in the seat. Then buckled up his
seatbelt. Josh put a small smile on his face and greeted everyone. "Hey
"Hey." The three said in unison.
"So, um, what's up? You're not looking like your usual self." Ryan
Josh ran his hand through his reddish hair and answered, "Tanya broke
up with me last night."
"I'm sorry dude." Ryan said, patting Josh's shoulder. He put the car
into drive and the four teenagers started on their way to Groovewood High.
A/N: Hey guys! Well here's another one of my stories. And this one
doesn't have Jesse McCartney in it! lol And I would really appreciate it if
I got a couple reviews per chapter so that it would keep me going. feedback
is always good! I have the first 5 and a half chapters written out and I
just have to type them. but I think I need people who are interested in the
story to continue it lol I know this chapter is a little boring and a
little short. but I promise it does get better and the chapters are longer.
( Talk to ya all later!