Odium

Trace the lines long sense broken
Choke on words never spoken
Sit aloft a pillar of odium and censure
Griping firmly onto the ledge and looking over
See me reflection in a ocean of depression
Picture myself drowning in my own obsession
I can barely recognize myself anymore
Blinded by all the things I abhor
Lean closer to touch upon my reflection
Bearing all the scars of pain and rejection
My monolith slides out from underneath me
And I become part of all I see
Fall into this fathomless lake of ink
Gasp and choke as I'm forced to drink
Absinthe and ambrosia mixed with decay
Watch as everything else turns gray
Slip beneath the service, whimper in despair
The water stills, the pillar fades, and I was never there

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I'm pretty fond of this one,
I personally think it's one of my best thus far.
Review if you want