A/N I’ve been changing the last bit over and over, I’m giving up on it and leaving it as is. There’s a song called "Waiting" by Gingerjake. The intro inspired this whole song. Check out .com and click on the music section. If you d/l it (it’s free and legal) then the rhythm to my song is like this:
Listen to the intro there’s a small little cymbal fill 9 or 10 seconds in, right before the lead singer starts. 3 lines of the verse should fit in these 10 seconds ex.," The way it feels, Serenely [little pause] beautiful. It’s the way it can’t be seen." And 4 lines of the chorus ex., "I’ll ask for it, But it wont know. And it won’t show, Cause no one knows." should fit as well. You should be able to piece the rhythm and melody together from that basic chord progression, just play the intro over and over lol. Not bad for 10 seconds of music.

The way it feels,
Serenely beautiful.
It’s the way it can’t be seen.
The way it heals,
Supremely unusual.
It’s the way the wounds come clean.

I’ll ask for it,
But it wont know.
And it won’t show,
Cause no one knows.

The time it takes,
Timely and dutiful.
It’s ‘ bout time to figure out.
The sign it makes,
Highly unsuitable.
I’ll figure out what it’s about

I’ll ask for it,
But it wont know.
And it won’t show,
Cause no one knows.

The pain you cause,
Strangely beautiful.
It’s the pain that scars my mind.
The name you lost,
Insanely usual.
It’s the name you cannot find.

I call for you,
But you’re not there.
Cause you don’t care.
Cause no one cares.

The hope you drain.
Slightly dilutable.
It’s the hope that I would try.
The rope, I hang,
Tightly, as usual.
It’s the rope. I finally die.

I call for you,
But you’re not there,
Cause you don’t care,
Still you’re not there.
Cause forgiveness,
Forgiveness, rare.