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Author: Edraith
Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Reviews: 3 - Published: 07-09-04 - Updated: 07-09-04 - Complete - id:1660920

Inadequacy

 

I tried to write a painting,

to capture colour with my words:

the heartbeat of the surging sea,

the beckoning of the birds...

but my lines were swallowed in failure -

and I stood in silence and awe

as I suddenly saw:

in the same way

they

the sky and the sea

so perfect to me

ebb and flow

are struggling to show

(and failing, too)

You.

 

1994



© Copyright 2004 Edraith (FictionPress ID:399346).


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