Hiya! It's me again! Here's another poem made by. ME!!!
This one, unlike my previous one, is a little more deeper. I suck at these
poems, but I like writing poems like this. I am a sensitive and emotional
person. Sometimes my poems reflect what I feel inside.
Enough with my blabbering! Here's my second poem!

In Me

My world is now so dark
I'm falling an endless fall
With no to catch me; with no one to save me
From the blackness of me soul

My light seems to have gone
Away from my own reach
Feeling so weak, so pathetic and useless
Can't do anything alone

But who says I can't try
Who says I will fail
I will make it out
Of this dark desert land

I will stand up myself
Ignoring the odds
I will now be free
With the power in me

Freedom is what I want
Wishing to clutch it tight
Before I would think it's too far from my reach
Yet now it's different

I know that I'm strong
I feel the power in me
I can make it out
Of this dark desert land

With the strength of my body
The power of my soul
My desire to win
I will now be free

With the power in me.

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Hehe! What do you think? I know it's crappy and all but please review it! I
really want to know how to improve myself. But no flames! I'm still new to
this! Thankies! =)