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Author: Eyes of Amethyst
Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Romance - Reviews: 3 - Published: 07-23-04 - Updated: 07-23-04 - id:1674327
Hey people! This is my second attempt to write a rhyming poem. I know the
first one sucked BIG TIME so I'm making it up to you all! I'm terribly
sorry about my first rhyming poem! I'm not exactly the expert when it comes
to rhyming poems, but I'm really trying!

Anyways, to psychedelic aya: I'm so sorry about the first one! I tried, and
I disappointed you.. I feel so ashamed! This time I really tried! And again
I'm so sorry if ever this sucks big time! Please forgive me!

Well, enjoy my second attempt to write a rhyming poem!

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Before I Go

Darkness...

It surrounds me day and night
Haunting me everyday
Always winning my inner fight

Loneliness...

A feeling I fell alone in the darkness
No one there to save me
From my heart's endless blackness

Pain...

It tears me apart slowly and painfully
Taking away my sanity
Both physically and spiritually

Light...

I long to feel its presence
My knight in shining armor
The answer to my problems

You...

The one I'm forced to leave
My one and only love
Our love I'll always believe

Love...

The spark in my heart
An emotion I've felt
More now that we're apart

Goodbye...

A word I have to say
Before I disappear forever
With one last words to lead your way

"I love you."

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Well, how was it? I hope it's nice and I hope it didn't suck! Anyways,
reviews will be really appreciated! Thankies! =)



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