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This is my First Story posted...so bare with me...sorry if it sucks! Disclaimer: All the characters in this story are mine. and Yes Kar is in my penname but i assure you it's not me. I just like the name. Everything that sounds like i don't own it then I don't. But if it does then I do :) This story will contain slash F/F so if you don't like it. Steer clear. I WARNED Ya! Kar is the main is usually in her point of view (pov) Other character point of views are mostly them talking to themselves. I used it to portray their feelings so you guys could get a better understanding of the character rather just know one side of the story.
""-means talking ***pov changes*** Well. If there are any other will let ya know!
Chapter Four
***Kar***
I rolled over in my bed to look at my alarm clock. It's only 5 in the
morning. I havent been able to sleep at all
all i can think about is her. I wonder what they did...did she even like
him. Ahh..this whole date thing is getting on my nerves...im hope she had a
bad time. Ok i know thats mean...but i saw her first..I got out of bed with
theses burning questions in my head. Threw on some clothes and walked down
to get some breakfast. I cant eat anything. I mean....im hungry i just cant
eat. My stomach keeps growling ..it feels like its eating itself! I
finally managed to get a pice of bread down. It was now 9 o clock.
hmmm..should i go over there now...she didnt really give me a time to go
over....i think ....yeah ill just go over there no. As noticed i was closer
and closer to getting to her house my stomach started acting up again. I
get ou the car and walked up to her door....Knock Knock. As she opened the
door ...I saw a million scenes going through my head each one ended up with
a kiss.
"oh hey!" she said
"hi" "I didnt think you were even alive this early" she said recalling bit's of our earlier conversations on the phone ......no kiss...no nothing....How could i expect something diffrent.....why am i so stupid! "umm...i couldnt sleep sorry" i said as we walked in her very clean house. We sat on her couch and an awkward silence fell in the air.
" so.....what do you want to do today " she asked in hopes of sparking conversation " umm.....idk." guess i killed that one "Oh! I have an idea!" Let's go to the beach!"she said enthusiasticlly
"uh..." and before i could finish what i was saying she grabed my hand and the bag i brough in . I had no idea where we were going but that didnt matter ...she was holding my hand! When we reached a stop she threw me in the batchrrom with my bag and said "get changed...were going to the beach!" crap...think of something to say...you know you dont want her to see you in that thing..... " I didnt bring my bathing suit" i said in hope this would pass which was a complete lie...would i mind so much if she saw me??
"man! " she must have known i was lieing cause she gave me a curious smile and said... "oh really....well let me see your bag.." a smile then appeared on my face ... "fine...be right back.." then i closed the door. I put the bathing suit on and turned to take a hard look at myself in the mirror man ...im ugly
I was so lost in my thoughts that she scared me when she knocked on the door to check on me " Kar? you going to come out? " "...no" I said knowing she wouldnt take that for an answer. " come on! " "you cant make me" i said childishly " hey i bought it...i think i have a right to see it" she argued.. "fine.."
I walked out with my hands covering myself...Id never shown this much skin before. She then giggled at the fact that i was being so shy...if it werent such a cute giggle i would have been mad. "put your hands down " she said gently As i lowered my hands i couldnt help the look she was giving me...i dont know what it mean but i hope it was something good..When she finally spoke she stumbled on her words "uh...you look ....nice...it ....umm....it shows...your body...um..it's nice" this mad me blush ..."thanks....so you ready" i asked to break the silence "yeah" she said quickly getting up and going to the door. I grabed my keys and we were off. While in the car some small talk was made... "so...what did you do ...you know before you could hang out with me?" she asked.. "umm...nothing really ...i guess watch tv" i said shamefully "that's cool....what's your favorite tv show?" .i dont like all these questions...but maybe..there's a reason...maybe...nah she cant be...can she?
"umm..Buffy the Vampire Slayer..." "oh cool...I have watched that a little.." That caught me off gaurd she doesnt seem like the type i guess.. " hey is'nt one of the characters gay on that show?" she questioned "yeah..." I said looking to see what she did....she had a weird expression on her face... "...that's gross..." she said as if trying to tell me something.. talk about being slapped in the face....i felt 100 arrows shoot from the sky ..right into my heart "uh...yeah i guess" i lied ...and im pretty sure she knew i was lieing and felt the hostility because she then turned on the radio and we listened to music the rest of the way. I was relived to get there...but then i noticed that the place was packed!
I didnt wan to get out of the car. So she came to the drivers side and opened the door..she looked at me smiled ....then all of a sudden she pulled me out and we ran towards the beach. I was having so much fun. I completely forgot about everyone that was there. The sand was hot so we put our stuff down and raced towards the water...once we got there...something hit me...the water was cool but not to cool...birds flying..children playing...and her...i never wanted it to end
***Jewels PoV***
Wow it's beatiful here...the sun is shining theres a nice breeze...wow...she looks amazing! Wait! What am i thinking...I cant possibly think anothher girl...is nice looking....let alone amazing...Ok..calm down...Let's just say that never happend!
***Jamie PoV***
(earlier that day)
As i walked downstairs there was a lof of commotion.
hmm...what's going on. I walked in the kitchen and my whole family was
there. My mom cooking and my 2 brothers fighting over a gameboy advance
game at the table. I asked my mom what we would be doing today grabing a
pice of what she was cooking and much to my disgust i found out we were
visiting our lovely beach this afternoon. I hate going to the
beach...ahh...sand get's everywhere ..not to mention those stupid annoying
couples that walk around holding hands........Let me puke!
"Jamie...your going...and that's final...besides honey..your just jealous" my mom said looking at me "NO im not! that's soo gross!" i lied...Of course im jealous...everyone get's what they want except for me...Ah..can i be anymore of a baby? After we all finished eating and got ready..we packed the trunk full of supplies. My family likes to eat ...alot! Cant blame them..food is good. Another reason i dont like going to the beach...it's about an hour long drive to get there ..and it sucks to be stuck in the car with my family that long...i mean i love them..but they can get annoying. I usually take my cd player but I couldnt find it. So i had to sit through my little brothers complaing and arguing the whole way there. I was so glad to get out of the car.....I practically jumped out while the car was still moving. Opps! I ran down to the beach and waited for my family. When they got there we put our stuff down next to these guys who kept staring at me.
My mom laughed at them. She knew as well as i do that they didnt stand a chance. That's one good thing abut my mother. She let's me be who i am. And who am I you may ask? Well....Im that shy girl sitting in the corner wishing she could do something about the way she feels about her. What? thought i was going to say im a lez right? well although that is true..that doesnt define who i am. It's just what i like. " Jamie will you please take your brothers down to the water?" ...My mom asked "sure" i said sarcaticlly....even though i ended up taking them After awhile i got bored of watching them so i decided to take a walk...
"dont go too far " my mom called after me yeah....wish i could ...
So there i was walking on the cool sand my bare feet fealing every grain underneath them. The wind was blowing I could feel some water from the waves crashing beside me. And out of no where...someone ran right into me. I was on the ground ...sand was in my eyes...I couldnt see who it was .."oh im so sorry about that ..i wasnt looking " "uh...it's ok " I said wiping myself off then i saw who it was...it was her...she bumped into me! " no really i should have been watching where i was going" she said again "no..really it's ok" I cant belive im actually talking to her... "umm.. Im kar" "uh." but before i could even say my name some other girl came "kar...??" said the other girl giving me a wierd look " Oh nothing...hey umm...i guess ill see you...sorry for bumping into you again" and she was off... Wow she looked so gorgeous in her bathing suit...i couldnt help but stare. I then started walking back to my family why didnt you say anything! ....why? wait...i know why ..because i was afraid of .."eww get away from me"
As i thought more about that...I turned to look at her again...and then..i noticed something diffrent...i noticed the way she was looking at the other girl...it's the same look..i get...when i look at her! and then it hit me.....that other girl...it's the girl that stck her nose in the fight!!
***Jewels***
wow the waves are so high...i can barely see her when they come. "Oh
no...here comes a big one" I say warning her and then it pulls me under and
straight into her....were scrambling around and we end up hugging each
other...i cant help..but feel.....tingly....Stop!! Suddenly she hits me
and runs towards shore.."hey come back here biatch!" i yell running after
her. "watch out!" i try to save her from running into someone but it was
too late...As i get closer i notice who it is...Oh crap! .. it's the girl
from the fight..i hope she doesnt tell her...what if she is telling her...i
have to stop it. "kar" ...phew i dont think she got a chance...ha
ha..looser!
***Kar***
Wow...what a day. It was great! But i shoudnt get my hopes
up....Why....why does she have to have Mike..I hate him! ..but....there
definitely seems like there's something there..i felt it...but who what
that girl..i swear she looks so familiar...i dont think she even gave me
her name...i wonder...she was cute!
A/N...WOW I Thought it would never end...It's long huh? i hope you liked it..sorry it's taking long to update...school gets in the way of my writing! Damn them! umm..well tell me what you think..is it worth writing more of it? Oh...sorry about the format...of this..i still havent figured out a good way to post..let me know if your having trouble understanding what's going on..