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Legend of Chaos offline. A Moment of Chaos introduces Peck’s famous grandmother. I love comments, I
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Chapter 1
Among the Anganocs’, there is a saying that goes, “If you can’t find it in the markets of Krynica,
then it does not exist.” After a person’s first glimpse of the market, the saying appears to be true. Goods
were brought from every remote corner of the Kingdom and sold in the capital’s market. The famous
Krynica Market even boasted of rare goods brought in from out kingdom. Among the multitude of
different stands, one could find rare Nami pottery, colorful Rrenian silks and exotic spices, and the delicate
metal work prized in Nungia. The air was heavy with the mixture of spices, foods and perfume creating a
unique aroma that belonged only to the market. The smell of meat and vegetables cooking with exotic
spices drew people to them and generous portions were quickly sold. The Market was truly a world of its
own, sitting in the heart of Anganoc’s capital city.
Today, however, not everyone was there to enjoy the Market. In fact, one man wandered up and
down the crowded aisles, oblivious to the goods that were waved under his nose. At least that was the
impression he was trying to give. The man known only as Nemesis wandered aimlessly around the Market,
trying his best to ignore the screech of the vendors yelling at him. The noise of the Market irritated him
and he strived to keep his face from showing it. He had never cared for crowded places. The people who
hustled by kept bumping him and jostling him. It took a slight struggle to keep the irritation from showing
on his face.
He continued to amble, his slow steps unhurried despite the almost constant jostling. When an
angry person turned to glare at him; they noticed his black uniform. He watched, with a slight pang of
smugness, as their irritation turned to an expression of nervousness and fear. People seemed to hurry away
from him after that. He watched several people scurry off, running into other people in their efforts to
remove themselves from his view.
He lost interest in watching people clear out of his way and turned his thoughts inward again as he
continued to wander the aisles. Without seeing anymore of the noisy market, he wrestled with his own
problems in the silence of his mind. He was jerked back to reality when he found himself in the center of
the market. Looking around the large square, Nemesis realized that he had never been here during the
afternoon auction. He knew the morning sales were for livestock, but the afternoon sales was dedicated to
the sale of slaves. With a sick fascination, Nemesis looked over the throng of people gathered to bid. He
had never seen a slave auction before. His eyes followed the crowd to the front were a hastily constructed
platform stood. He eyed the rickety platform, doubting the flimsy thing would stand through the harsh
Anganoc winter.
His attention turned to what was happening on the platform. Mentally he corrected himself, he
knew very well that the platform was actually referred to as a “block”. Currently on the block stood a
young boy, no more then seven or eight years of age. Even from a distance, Nemesis could see the fear in
the child’s eyes, as he looked frantically over the heads of the people gathered to purchase. With his lower
lip trembling, he looked as if he was facing his worst nightmare. Although caked with dirt, Nemesis could
tell the boy’s hair was one of the strange light colors found in the lands south of Anganoc. The auctioneer
reached out with a stick and prodded the boy to turn. With the look of fear intensifying, the boy did as he
was prodded to. His nude body gleamed under the afternoon sun.
“It’s the legs you need to study; good legs is what makes a fighter.” A whisper from a pair of men
standing near him drifted to Nemesis’s ears. The speaker’s neighbor grunted-his eyes never leaving the
block. After a moment, he answered, “Nah, it’s the chest I worry about. Legs are good, but it you put him
up against a bear or a big cat, you want a strong chest to have a chance.” For emphasis the speaker
pounded on his own ample chest. This remark earned him a snort of disagreement. From their speech,
Nemesis deduced that they boy would most likely end up training for a life in the Arena. He shook his
head, pondering how long that life would be before moving on to think about why the people of Anganoc
seemed so fascinated with watching a man risk his life to fight a large and dangerous animal.
“Such a waste of life,” he muttered, loud enough for his neighbors to hear him. Out of the corner
of his eye he saw his neighbor turn to glare at him. Nemesis turned his head slightly, just enough to meet
the man’s eyes. He had a clear view of when the man actually noticed his uniform. The glare died on his
face and he swallowed nervously. Knowing it was petty, Nemesis smiled slightly. The man jerked his eyes
away from Nemesis and stared straight ahead. A large bead of sweat appeared on the man’s forehead and
trickled downward. Nemesis watched for a second longer before turning his own attention back to the
front.
With impassive eyes, he watched as the boy sold. He was only slightly surprised to see the next
slave up for bid was a girl. He judged her to be no more then fourteen years of age. Unlike the boy, she
stood on the platform with no trace of fear. Her gaze was steady as she looked over the crowd. She
seemed unconcerned with her nudity, maintaining a regal stance as the crowd studied her.
Nemesis let his eyes drift over her, studying her as one would a dog or a horse. Her body bore the
markings of one of the Nami Clans that inhabited the vast plains to the south of Anganoc. He winced at the
complexity of some of the designs on her back. Some of his fellow Shadows bore similar marks in their
attempts to blend in with the Clans and had told him about the pain involved in the permanent procedure.
Nemesis wasn’t sure what the marks meant, except for the large one on her lower back. That complex
design, with its interlocking lines crossing over each other, told him that had she remained with her Clan
she would have risen to become the matriarchal leader of her family. With a morbid turn of thought, he
realized there was no chance of that happening now because her future would lie in the hands of her future
master.
Like most of the citizens of Anganoc, Nemesis could claim very little knowledge of the Nami.
The Nami nomads were several close-knit Clans that lived on the flatlands south of Anganoc. They were
tribal, ruled by something called the Council of Nami. Supposedly, the Council consisted of
representatives from all the tribes. Nemesis doubted anything that absurd could be true. His opinion was
strengthened when he heard that women were allowed to sit on the Council. The Shadows that bore the
tattoos of Nami Clans explained to him that it was very hard to spy among the Nami because of the use of
family ties in daily dealings. The ties are too complex to be lied about convincingly, and without the
presence of blood ties an agent could only penetrate so far into Nami society.
A little angry to find his thoughts wandering again, Nemesis went back to his study of the girl on
the block. Whatever she was no longer mattered. The auctioneer was still silent, allowing people to look at
the girl before beginning the bidding. Murmurs of conversations blended together as people talked
amongst themselves. Nemesis looked over the girl one last time before turning to leave. She was a pretty
little thing, under the dirt that was caked to her skin. She would probably end up in one of Krynica’s
brothels. Towards the front or the crowd, Nemesis could see several agents from prominent brothels
eyeing the girl. He could read the excitement in their stances as they faced the girl.
He was turning to leave, when he saw something else that stopped him dead in his tracks. His eye
caught more then the brothel agents and he wished desperately that he hadn’t looked. The girl might not
end up at the brothels. In the front of the crowds, wearing very plain clothes to avoid notice was the
personal servant of one of the High Lords. Nemesis had been assigned to watch High Lord Errian for a
very long time and was very aware of who his servants were. Nemesis was a little ashamed that he hadn’t
seen the man earlier, but buried that emotion under the anger that swelled inside of him. Nemesis recalled
the tortured corpses that remained of the slave girls Errian purchased. He felt sickened by the memory of
it.
The anger rose again, and Nemesis growled out loud. The rest of the market faded into the
background of his thoughts as his entire attention focused on the weasel of a man in the front of the crowd.
The anger that Nemesis had sought to escape from that day burst into existence again. Nemesis glared at
the man again, feeling all his hatred of the man’s master.
“Let us start the bidding at 100 pei.” The auctioneer’s voice boomed over the crowd. Nemesis
vaguely heard the auctioneer’s voice, so engrossed as he was in his glaring. Nemesis wretched his gaze off
of the servant and back to the block. Quietly, he took several deep breaths in an attempt to regain his
composure. He felt someone looking at him. He snapped his head around to meet the gaze of the grubby
man beside him. Already a bit nervous to see the black uniform, the anger on Nemesis face pushed the
grubby man to far. His eyes grew large and he stumbled backwards into his friend.
“Hey, Drun, watch were you are going!” Drun’s companion snapped, pulling his eyes off of the
block for the first time that afternoon. He frowned at his friend, before looking up to see what had
frightened him so. Upon seeing Nemesis, both men decided to leave the auction for another day. Nemesis
turned back to the front, not seeing the girl. He didn’t watch the pair of men scurry from the square with
frantic looks back to make sure he wasn’t following them.
The bidding jumped quickly to 300 Pei. High Lord Errian’s servant waited for a lull to casually
up the bidding to 500 Pei. Several of the brothel agents declined to up their bids, preferring to wait for
cheaper meat for their business. It didn’t look like anyone was going to bid against Errian’s man.
“1000 pei.” Nemesis snarled, surprising himself. Several people looked over their shoulders to see
who had entered the bidding. After several noticed Nemesis, the square cleared out a little more. Some
very brave souls felt safe in their distance from him to stare openly. Curiosity painted their features, but
Nemesis didn’t notice.
“A thousand?” the auctioneer’s eyes grew wider, and the tip of his tongue crept out to wet his lips.
His beady eyes shifted back to the now silent bidders, “Any other bids?” The silence seemed deafening.
For one moment, the entire square was silent. The silence was broken by the auctioneer’s gavel banging
down on the cheap, wooden podium before him.
“All right then, sold to one of the King’s Shadows for one thousand pei.”
But Nemesis wasn’t watching the auctioneer. He ignored the feel of the many pairs of eyes on
him as he watched Errian’s servant. Secretly he hoped to see fear or a trace of nervousness on the man’s
thin face. When he realized he wasn’t going to get the satisfaction, the cold reality of what he had done hit
him.
His anger left him as quickly as it had arrived, leaving him alone to face the crowd that now stared
at him. He tried not to let his emotions show on his face as he started forward, attempting to ignore the
crowd. People parted before him, stepping back to allow him to pass. The entire crowd seemed to watch
every step he took. The buzz of whispered conversations followed in his wake, and he was glad he
couldn’t make out the individual comments.
He silently wished they would stop staring at him; he hated being the center of attention. Vaguely,
he was aware of the auctioneer trying to regain the crowd’s attention. He realized it was futile to try, so he
fell silent as Nemesis approached the front of the square.
Still very aware of the eyes on him, Nemesis reached the rickety table that stood beside the block.
A scribe was scribbling in a large, leather-bound book on the table. The pen ceased its scratching when
Nemesis finally stopped before it. The scribe raised his eyes to Nemesis.
“Can you write?” the scribe sniffed rudely as he shoved the book across the table towards
Nemesis. Without responding, Nemesis turned the book and held his hand out for the pen. The scribe
slapped into his outstretched hand with another sniff. Nemesis glanced down over the page until the scribe-
with yet another sniff-pointed to a spot with a dirty finger. Nemesis signed his name before straightening
and dropping the pen onto the table. Movement out of the corner of his eye made him aware of a new
arrival to the table. Nemesis looked at the man before him before looking down to see what the man was
holding in his hand. His eyes followed the leash from his hand to where it attached to the girl’s neck. The
girl stood, openly studying him. She didn’t drop her eyes when she noticed him looking at her. She met
his gaze for a moment, before letting her mouth tighten and looking away.
With a slight grimace, Nemesis gingerly accepted the leash as it. He turned and led the girl from
the market, wishing desperately that he could hide under one of the nearby stands until everyone forgot
him. He walked with quick steps in a vain attempt to flee from the stares that continued to follow him.
Another thought struck him. Gossip about a Shadow quickly flowed to the center of the Shadows.
The head of the Shadows, a man called Thanatos, was sure to hear about the events that had occurred that
afternoon. Increasing his speed until he was almost running, Nemesis hoped he could reach Thanatos
before the rumors did.
Something unexpected had just happened, and Kerianna had no idea as to what. She had been led
down from the block to a flurry of movement from the previously slow-moving slave tenders. They
whispered in their guttural language as they tugged the dirty tunic over her head. After the humiliating
exposure of the block, Kerianna was grateful for the little covering that the tunic provided. One of her
handlers did take the time to grab her bottom, causing her to jump.
She couldn’t imagine what had caused such a reaction among the tenders, nor did she really care.
A leash was clipped to the collar around her neck and with a quick jerk; she was led to a table near the
bottem of the block. Feeling a little scared, Kerianna looked back over her shoulder toward the holding
pens. She saw a face she had known since childhood watching her. Heranittis, the shaman of her clan,
raised his hand to her. She tried to give him a reassuring smile, but doubted he saw it as she was tugged
away.
The man who had purchased her was bent over a little table writing something in a book. Her
teeth ground together at the thought of someone being her owner. With him distracted, she had been given
the perfect opportunity to study him.
At first glance, he seemed to look the same as the rest of the dark Anganocs. His black hair was
worn long enough to brush his face. The black hair was broken at the temples by patches of gray beginning
to work their way through his hair. She knew without seeing them that his eyes would be as dark as all the
other eyes she had seen since being taken. Her gaze moved down, over the clothes he wore. The simple
black outfit screamed uniform to her, even without the nervous glances of the people around her. It
consisted of a simple black tunic, devoid of decoration, worn over a black shirt. The outfit was well made
and the expensive cloth seemed well taken care of. The breeches were of a heavier material. The entire
outfit seemed to be fitted a bit closer to the man’s body then the other Anganoc men’s outfits Kerianna had
seen. Even with its tighter fit, it left the man plenty of room to work or move in. A wide black belt was
worn over the tunic. The leather was clean and supple. A dagger hung openly at his side, giving her a
moment of hesitation. She wasn’t used to seeing a weapon worn so openly.
The man straightened and looked at her. He was easily a head taller then she was, but his lean
frame made him seem taller. She was right about his eyes, they were the same dark color as every other
Anganoc she had seen. Wrinkles were beginning to form at the corners of his eyes and mouth. Kerianna
refused to be cowed and stood straight before him. She met his gaze, not bothering to repress the anger she
felt. After a moment, she turned her gaze away, watching him out of the corner of her eyes. It didn’t
escape her attention that he felt very uncomfortable with the crowd watching him.
He turned quickly and walked toward one of the many aisles that surrounded the auction area.
Since he had her leash, she had no choice but to try to keep up with his rapid pace. She noticed that a
majority of the crowd was watching him with curiosity. It didn’t help her nerves, that along with the
curiosity was also fear.
She followed the man through the market. He muttered softly to himself, and didn’t seem very
happy. This didn’t bother her, because she didn’t give a damn how he felt. She tried to continue to study
him as he dragged her through the market. She had never been anywhere so crowded in her life!
Stumbling slightly as she removed her gaze from the ground, she glared at his back. Her new
owner insisted on walking at a pace that would be better termed a run. He looked back over his shoulder at
her, grunted and tugged her leash. As the leather bit into her neck again, she cursed quietly under her
breath, using words she had never been allowed to say on the Plains. She hung onto her anger, knowing
that if she let it go, she would have no choice but to ponder what lay in store for her.
In other circumstances, Kerianna would have found the city very interesting. She had never seen a
city, only heard about them in the strange tales Heranittis told. The city seemed to pulsate with life; unlike
the peaceful calm of the grasslands she had known all her life. The road under her feet was laid out with
stones. Every now and then, a corner of a large, flat stone of the road would protrude, causing her to trip.
Her owner didn’t seem to notice her stumbling around behind him, and kept a steady grip on the leash. The
constant pressure was painful to her already sore neck.
When the rare occasion arose that she felt confident in raising her eyes from the ground, She
stared at the buildings that lined the road. She imagined that these were the houses that Heranittis had
mentioned in his stories. She couldn’t imagine liking someone so much as to jam her house up against
theirs. Several had large windows in the front with things hanging in them. People bustled in and out of
them. Kerianna could only imagine these were shops. She felt amazed and overwhelmed with how many
people lived in a city.
Kerianna looked ahead, over her owner’s shoulders. Her mouth dropped open when she saw the
largest building she could ever imagine rising up before them. She shut her mouth quickly, before anyone
could notice a slave girl gaping. Her owner didn’t hesitate, and Kerianna felt that he was leading them
right towards it.
His steps didn’t falter as he kept his pace through a large gate that appeared to be cut through the
thick stone wall that surrounded the building. It was then that Kerianna realized that the huge building
within the wall was actually made up of several large buildings. She slowed her pace to look around and
study the place, but her owner kept a steady pressure on her leash. She was tugged down one of the
carefully swept paths, not given a chance to study the carefully cultivated flowerbeds that lined it. Her
owner hesitated at the path’s intersection, looking down both paths for a second before tugging her down
one of them. With a sigh, Kerianna allowed the tugging leash to pull her after him.