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Author: Stefen
Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Reviews: 5 - Published: 08-09-04 - Updated: 08-09-04 - id:1690167
On The Outside

A myriad of straight-A students

Icons of intelligence

Loom ahead

.

Superior knowledge

Immaculate delivery

Qualities most only dream of

.

They walk with ease

With confidence

And self-assurance

.

I am among them

And yet I’m still

On the outside looking in

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Please review! I really don’t like this but I couldn’t get it to work so I thought, fuck it! I’ll load it up anyway! The last stanza is extremely cliched and I’ve used the word ‘loom’ in both of the poems I’ve written this afternoon but hey! I really can’t confess to caring at this point! Please review!



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