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A myriad of straight-A students
Icons of intelligence
Loom ahead
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Superior knowledge
Immaculate delivery
Qualities most only dream of
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They walk with ease
With confidence
And self-assurance
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I am among them
And yet I’m still
On the outside looking in
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Please review! I really don’t like this but I couldn’t get it to work so I thought, fuck it! I’ll load it up anyway! The last stanza is extremely cliched and I’ve used the word ‘loom’ in both of the poems I’ve written this afternoon but hey! I really can’t confess to caring at this point! Please review!