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This is Cool Breeze. Please read and review. I know it’s only short. Please comment on the wording. Is this how you would describe a cool breeze on a warm summers day? – merci hidden Jewel
Cool BreezeThe breeze envelopes me
It smothers my senses
It quenches and calms
And kisses and cleanses
It captures my soul
And leaves me breathless
Feeding my spirit
With its gentle caresses