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Author: hidden jewel
Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Reviews: 8 - Published: 08-10-04 - Updated: 08-10-04 - id:1690255

This is Cool Breeze. Please read and review. I know it’s only short. Please comment on the wording. Is this how you would describe a cool breeze on a warm summers day? – merci hidden Jewel

Cool Breeze

The breeze envelopes me

It smothers my senses

It quenches and calms

And kisses and cleanses

It captures my soul

And leaves me breathless

Feeding my spirit

With its gentle caresses



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