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Out the door

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Cries of loathing

Tears of failure

A pointed finger

Out the door

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A whispered word

A comforting smile

Promises of love

Out the door

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Cold winter nights

A frosty breeze

Dreams of warmth

Out the door

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A sorrowful glance

A quick goodbye

Run from affection

Out the door

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Victim of the streets

A lost cause

Feelings of vulnerability

Out the door

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A menacing snarl

Sharp knife glistening

Hopes of life

Out the door

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Darkness impending

Last wishes not granted

Feeble light flees

Out the door

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Please please please review!