|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
Eskadi woke up, the nights serene embrace shedding its dewy tears
around the teepee he lived in. The Native American boy crept out of his
bed, the coarse deer hide scraping against his leg. He put on his clothes,
and slipped on his moccasins, tying up the strings and pulling them tight.
Eskadi undid the straps holding his tent shut and stepped out into the
twilight of the early morning. The rising sun cast eerie shadows of his
clan members, mingling them in with the grainy grey haze of early morning,
making the air seem to dance with delight of the coming day.
Even at thirteen Eskadi could appreciate the pristine beauty of this
perfect day, the way the sunlight shone through the emerging clouds,
casting beams of light down from the heavens and illuminating the dew
clinging to the bright green leaves of the trees. Tears came to his young
eyes when he turned and gazed at the lake by his teepee.
The water was as smooth as glass, light ripples calmly traveling
outward, growing and growing until they were absorbed back into the
peaceful abyss of the lake. He ran down towards it, removing his clothes
once again and slipping into the lake's cool embrace. He let the water flow
over him, letting it caress his skin and cleanse his soul, letting it to
pull him down to the bottom, where all noise ceased and total peace came
over him. He closed his eyes and let himself become one with the crystal
clear water that surrounded him. After floating at the bottom in serenity
he pushed off and let the liquid tranquility flow over his face as he
approached the surface. He stared up and saw the surface approaching, the
light mingling with the water to form beautifully intricate patterns that
bent and twisted in a vibrant dance of life around him. He broke the
surface and gasped in cool, clear air. It made his lungs burn, but he
relished every second of it.
Eskadi's father called to him from the shore, telling him to come
quickly, he had a surprise for him. Curious, the boy paddled over to the
bank, climbed out and laid on the ground to let the sun's newly raised
waves to wash over him and dry his wet body. As he laid there, the boys
father began telling him the news.
"Son, you are becoming a man now, and it is time for you to take the
initiation into our clan, as a full contributing member. Are you ready to
accept this challenge?" asked Eskadi's father. The whole thing was just a
formality, all part of the ancient tradition that spread down through the
ancestors back into ancient times.
Eskadi replied with the traditional expected answer.
"Yes, Father, I am ready to take on my responsibilities as a member of our
clan, and as a man."
Eskadi stood tall as he said this, feeling extremely important and grown
up. He had been looking forward to this moment for years; ever since he
could walk he had dreamed of becoming a war hero. He remembered the war
games he played with his friends in the woods, the fierce stick battles
they had fought, and the wars they had waged.
-- --
Eskadi crouched, poised in a tree, the lush green leaves providing
cover for his deadly game. He had his bow drawn and an arrow cocked, the
heartstring bow pulled taught and the creaking sound of sinew stretching
was the only thing that could be heard; the forest was silent of all other
sounds. The birds amiable chirping and the wind rustling through the boughs
were gone, replaced by the stretch of the bow and the almost inaudible
sounds of enemy moccasins rushing leaves under its weight.
Eskadi smiled faintly to himself: his prey was in sight. The waiting
had paid off. He took careful aim and followed the boy along his path. When
the time was right Eskadi let the arrow fly, the arrow's deadly arch making
a whooshing sound as it tore at the air in its desperate dash to find its
target. The wax tip of the arrow struck home, hitting his prey in the
chest.
As soon as the arrow had been released, Eskadi jumped down silently
and drew his stick-knife. He scampered along the ground, making no noise as
his moccasins made their way across downed branches and large bushes.
Eskadi came up behind his stricken enemy, grabbing his head and running the
stick-dagger across his throat, leaving a brown trail of bark and dirt
across his neck.
"You got me. How do you do it, Eskadi? I had no idea you were there until
you were on me," the young boy looked into his friends' eyes, "I will
follow you into battle any day."
Eskadi felt deeply touched at Wovoka, his friends', gesture. Even though
they were only ten, it was never too early to think about battle when you
grow up in their clan. They were bred for war, and had acres and acres of
land across the country, taken from conquered peoples.
"I would be honored to fight alongside you."
Wovoka agreed and they set off to find their other companions, who
had been spread out through the forest in pursuit of their enemy.
-- --
Eskadi returned to the present, snapping out of his reverie to be
reminded of his existence by the now bright sun, and surprisingly loud
noise of his father speaking.
"You will go out into the woods, and you must survive for one month on your
own. We leave you with only the clothes on your back, your dagger and my
blessing. Prepare today and be ready to leave tonight."
"I will be ready"
Eskadi left for his teepee, all the way thinking about the challenge
that lay before him. He knew that he had the skills, as he had been
training for this day for years. He could hunt, fish, and make shelter. He
could melt into the shadows of the forest, and move silently among the
trees. He knew how to skin animals to make clothing and could do anything
he needed to survive.
He had made his way back to his tent, lost in thought, without the
assistance of his mind at all: his legs had carried him there
independently. Inside the tent he sat down and thought, almost a
meditation, though he remained conscious. Time slipped away like sand
through fingers and before he realized it, it was time to gather his things
and make his way to the Parting Point. Eskadi picked up his spear and put
on his moccasins and ran down to the clearing where he would say good bye.
His whole clan was there to see him off, and he was glad they had turned
up.
After a quiet goodbye, Eskadi ventured off into the forest to fulfill
his destiny. As he strode into deep woods the sinking sun illuminated the
leaves, making the whole forest dance in celebration of the closing of the
day.