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Author: DanWilson
Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror - Published: 08-30-04 - Updated: 09-03-04 - id:1707587
A horrible sight to be seen for sure. Nobody ever wanted to see a war break out. A man overlooked a gathering of people with whips, swords, and staffs. A man on the field with a whip calmly walks up to another from behind. He readies his whip and is about to crack it, but before he could the other man turned around and before he knew it, he found that his whip and himself were the only things left standing. Everybody else that has been fighting with him has been killed at the hands of this man and his sword.

The man with the sword began to speak words Aramaic. The survivor looked at him into his eyes. He seen a mental image of something in his head. He had never seen anything like this before, nor had he felt like that before. It was a different sense of feeling. The man speaking Aramaic put his hand out and a glow came over it. From the other mans chest came a chain with a clay figure on it. The glow telepathically cut the chain and the figure smashed.

So he stood there looking at his fallen friends and warriors that have been killed by the hands of this man. He looked up and there was the person that was overlooking this battle and there something swept over him and the vision in his head from the man disappeared. He had a choice now. He had to give into the powers of the man looking over him or to the powers of the man in front of him. He stood there starring down at the man in front and one word came out of his mouth "The Fallen One." followed by a long silence. He looked back up at the man on the cliff and nodded. The man dropped his whip. While continuing to speak in Aramaic the other warrior picked his sword up from the ground and walked over to the young man. The Aramaic took off his helmet to reveal his long grey hair to go with his deep blue eyes. The young warrior could have sworn that his eyes were red not long ago. The young warrior dropped his whip and accepted his fate. It was his time to die. The sword that was clasped in the old mans hands came swiftly down upon him. The warrior was dead.

The old man stood now with his back turned to the other man that was looking over him. He began speaking Aramaic again, and turned his back to face the other. He glanced down to his feet and a glow came over his feet. He began to ascend into the air. He floated his way towards the other and dropped when he was beside him. The other man looked at him and nodded to acknowledge something. The other man put his hand on the shoulders of the older one and put a hard grip on it...The old man fell down.

For years people have told this tale and believed in it. For years people believed that this event is the event that ended the war for heaven. Something happened then on a cold winter night. A boy was born to a still virgin mother. His name was Jesus. When he was born the war for heaven was started again. Nobody was able to tell the tale of this one. It was between heaven and hell, though we believe that heaven won this one as well. On record there is believed to be one evil, one force, one devil. It doesn't matter what you call him, there is only one.

People also believe that hell does not exist. Some say that hell is just beyond the reaches of the first gate of heaven. Others believe that hell is our very own earth, for when the fallen one descended from heaven he came back to Earth and brought with him evil. Each time he is defeated it is said that evil takes on a new form. However, it is believed that he was never once truly defeated. They say that it is because of the son of God that he can not be destroyed and others say that you can only defeat evil by using evil. For certain we know not of what to do but we do know that times are changing and through these times we are going to experience many events, in which will lead to another war, and I believe that this is going to be the final war.

Note: I know there is a hole there in th plot and in grammar and such but trust me, I am going to fill those holes in. I do not intend to offend anybody with this story and I do not intend this to be the real story of God, The Devil, and jesus.



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