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Damp Stars
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THIS IS A collection of non-conforming, somewhat angsty tankas aspiringly stirring various subjunctive emotions within all those who view it; I hope it either kisses your soul or pierces it. Updated weekly.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Spiritual/Suspense - Chapters: 5 - Words: 2,013 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 09-30-04 - Published: 09-01-04 - id: 1709515
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This one is easy. Remember, read, review, and then read the translation. K? ^-~

A prick of rouge springs!
Clamorous echo against
The barren cement
Fat tears wobble down smooth roads
Mixing points of green and red

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Translation: Girl bleeds. Girl vomits. Slo-mo of droplets of blood hitting the floor, like in the Matrix or in some other bad movie. (The Matrix was cool, tho...) Simple, ne? Oh, and I'm sorry again. Let's put it this way: I'll say that I'll update on Wednesday, but you should probably expect it
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