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Author: Nothing Profound
Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Reviews: 8 - Published: 09-04-04 - Updated: 09-04-04 - id:1711452
"Chapter" 2:
I wanted to do this so that I could respond to each review. Each "chapter" will be a new/different poem.

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Glassy Water

Looking through the cracks in the dock
I see the water below
Shining, swimming like glass
Moving peacefully to its destination.

So, to business:

F.C.- Thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond to my poetry! I also appreciate the constructive criticism for "Silent."

Sillygoose49: Thanks for your review! I will look at your work!

A/N: Help me! I'm stuck on this "rhyming thing." When the words just 'come to me,' so to speak, they rhyme. And it annoys me. If anyone has some tips on how I can break the habit, they are greatly appreciated. Glassy Water is one of the few that I have wrote which doesn't rhyme. Thanks again, everybody!

~FlowingQuill



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