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Author: Elven Sorcerer
Fiction Rated: M - English - Humor - Published: 09-13-04 - Updated: 09-13-04 - id:1719208
Roger Pollock Author's note:
I think this will be the Final Draft. So I would like to hear what you felt about it for future reference on future story. And NO! This is where it ends! No, there won't be any more to it. So here it goes, and by reading this story you agree to not question me about it because it will not be explained. Like some people would demand it to be explained! HA!! And also I am relinquished of all responsibility of this document, including misjudgments, discrimination, or offending of any kind. Now just to warn you, there are some pretty graphic parts! One fast note, this is completely fiction. Completely!
You have been warned!
Rating: R Summary:
This story is of two people, destined by fate. Fall in love and try to handle the embarrassment of taking their relationship to the next level.

Prelude:
A man looks out into the crowd of people. He is desperately searching for some one. His eyes search at every angle and degree. A beautiful young woman issues forth from the crowd, the woman smiles. Her eyes shine like the twinkling of stars over the ocean. The man, glows with delight and leaps over to her. She hugs him in only a way that could show more than friendship, the hold that is the bond of love. He pulls gently away from the embrace to see her more clearly. "I love you," pours out from his lips. "I really missed you," she replies, almost abruptly. He smiles and takes her hand. They leave all the chaos of the world around them; the only people in the world are them.

The School
She walks down the hall. The halls are crowded with boys, who all but can keep their eyes to them selves. "What are you looking at!?! Brad, Are you listening , HER! I tell you, if you guys gained brain cells every time that bitch walked by you guys, you would be able to study for that final! Not to mention all the happy women in the World!" If she thought that Brad was listening at all to that cursing, she was wrong. He was completely hypnotized by the simple flips and waves of her hair. Her slight curls bouncing and dancing on her perfect breasts. And the swaying of her hips was worth, seeing even if he must never see another girl again. But he could never tell Christine *that, they were going out and that meant that he was stuck with her until a hotter girl either was new to the school and he got her first, or a hotter girl dumped a guy and he would have to dump Christine and ask her out. And on top of that, if the girl said "no" he would have to crawl back to "old-reliable" Christine. It was a complex system of protocol.
Christine was still talking about how that girl shouldn't even walk among them all, "to think, she'll already has a boyfriend, what's his name, and she's still enticing the 'boys'!" She just kept on talking, but there was no one listening. All the boys were still staring at that girl, as she rhythmically, walked away. She walked on unit till a man stopped her. "Excuse me Beautiful, how are you going my way?"
"Now why would you ask something like that?"
"Well," he started, taken aback, "I thought I could just help ."
"Thanks but no thanks. I can handle walking to my next class; I will not need to have an escort to follow me, either!" She just walked away, a couple girls just giggled and pointed at the boy. Luckily his friend said, "I thought I told you, Charlie! She's taken. She's even got a line of guys after that, waiting in line. Not that she knows it. Girls being as useless as they are, other than for the obvious, now come on Charlie; you need to give me the answers to the Chemistry work."
"Okay, Matt." So Matt and Charlie walk towards Chemistry, Charlie never turning his gaze from the girl.

The Invitation
"So, I was thinking, how about a party at my place?"
"I don't know hun', I think it would hard to tie your brother over, he might be the weasel to your parents." She shook her head, and rolled her blue eyes.
"I don't think so; I think he might add to the fun! And he even isn't that dense to give up on a party! So stop complaining Nicole!"
"What ever you think! Your party. And your parents!" Nicole just smiled and started giggle fit out of nowhere. Everyone knew about her laughing fits. "You think you can invite your boy-toy!?!"
"Hay, he is coming and he's not my 'boy-toy!"
"You haven't even called him!"
"What?!? How do you know?!?"
"Girl, you know I got the Gift!"
"Yeah, you know what's more disturbing then that 'Gift'.Your fake Black attitude!" Everyone laughs, including the rest of their English class.

***

Later, the girls all walked from their last classes for the day and met together on the school steps.
"So, are we goin' to your house, Party-girl?"
"NO! .I mean, no, I have something to do at home."
"Calling your 'Boy-toy' being one of them!" Frustrated at her friends she walked home, alone, for the first time since the beginning of school. This wasn't a bad thing, because she had a lot of things on her mind.

"So, I am going to have a party, do you want to be a good .brother? No, he's going to see through that once I walk in to that room!" She stands out side of her brother's room talking to the floor. A voice, howlers from within the room. "Is that ? Because, if you want me to answer you're going to have to speak up!"
"Ha ha, very funny! How much did you hear?"
"Enough to be interested. What's in it for me?"
"You could have bragging rights, for a year, not in front of mom or dad. Ummm, you could sleep with my friends, if they're good and drunk, granted, it must be with their consent!" The door flings open and a big muscular man walks out with a tank top and a pair of running shorts on.
"I'm intrigued that you use the 'sleep with friends card' you didn't use that one since you met fag-boy! Ah ha! That's it, what do you plan to do?!?"
"No questions asked! And he's not Fag-boy!"
"Okay, no questions asked, and ditto for me! Unless you want to know what will be going on with me and your friends!" He rustled her hair in the palm of his big hand.
"No! Just go, make it done, do what you do best! I don't care!" She stormed away and rests in the sanctuary of her room. She reaches for the phone and pauses. What if he says no, what would I do? Get a grip, girl! He LOVES you; he wouldn't do something against you!
She dialed the number.
. "Hi sexy!"

The Forethoughts
"I can't believe it! Your bitch is in heat! Take her by the hand and show HER the Sand!"
"Thanks, Mark, I think I can handle it."
"Damned right! I think your going gay! And you are just not telling her! Then can I take her for a spin?"
"Mark! I'm not GAY! And no you can't take her for 'a spin.' We were meant for each other."
"And I know how!" He began to hump the nearest desk.
"Mark! I don't believe you! I am not going to."
"Awwww! He doesn't want it because he hasn't the balls to take it!"
"You bastard! I have the balls! I could take anyone of these girls, right NOW!" All the girls in the Geometry class started to smile, some pointing and giggling, or some, suddenly interested, waving and winking.
"Yeah, on the Friend-ship, not the Cunt-cruise!" Mark just laughed and slapped his knee. He never saw the punch coming.

***

As he was walking down the stairs he saw one of his slutty-friends (ones that would screw anything but him). "Hi Michelle!"
"Oh, hi! Where have you been?!? I seem to never see you!"
"Well, I don't usually have something to talk to you about. So I don't waste your time." Or the time of your clients!
"Awww. You my time any time! I think? But what do you have to talk to me about?"
" you know my girlfriend?"
"Yeah, the slutty-chick? With the blonde hair and big knockers? The dumb-cluck?"
No she is not your clone, Michelle! "I guess, yeah. Umm, I'm going to a party with her and I was wondering."
"Y-e-e-e-s-s-s?"
"Am. you I -you-think-I-am-the-person-someone- would-have-sex-with!"
"Wow, that took guts! And my answer .I don't know.I don't have any basis."
Sure you don't!
", I could see it. With your hair .tone. Granted that you aren't going to win a Mr. Universe competition! But over all you got there some pretty, sexy, curves!"

"Welcome! You can waste my .?" He walked away before she noticed.

The Party
So, I'm here! Okay, I'm not a poser! I am going out with the real thing! Stay calm; there won't even be that much pressure. There won't even be that many people!
He rang the door bell and the door opened immediately, a gate to the chaos of the world.
"Hi," she said. "Hi," he said.
"Welcome to my party!" And he entered in.

***

There are too many people! She thought. He's going to be too busy being hit-on by my drunk-bitch-friends!
She walked over to her boy-toy and said, "Nice party huh?"
"" He said, he cringed as the volume of the music was turned up, for the fourth time after it was deafening.
"You want to go somewhere.I don't ?!?" Absolutely!!
"Sure"

She led him up the stairs, passed her brother's room, and to her door. He broke the silence, "The music is a lot quieter up here!" She laughed, he always was known for his practically. I just hope he caches the hint so I don't have to spell it out.
She opened the door and her room was then filled with light. "Ummm, you want to sit on the bed?"
"Sure." Come on! How can he be this dense I want him, now!!

***

Okay, I'm on the bed, now what do I do? If I make the next move will she think that I'm a pervert? Like Mark? But I love her , if she really loves me she will see where I am coming from. Okay? . okay!
He opens his it. Thinks. Then finally, after a killing few seconds.
"I love you."
"I love you too!" She seemed to ripple with happiness that made her boobs bounce. And that was the waker-upper.
"Ummm, I know we're close. 've determined that we both share love of one another. Ummm. Do-you-want-to-go-farther?" And he slammed his lips on to hers. He could feel her surprise, but he could also feel her relief. She slowly snaked her tongue in to his mouth and his hands slowly sank down to her chest.
He always prided her for her perfect breasts. He couldn't withstand himself and he tore off her blouse, and banished it to the floor. He opened his eyes to see her lacey, black, bra. He always was turned on by black negligee. And she knew it! He chuckled to him self, Mark would die of freight, he wouldn't know how to work one! She began to worry what if he doesn't know what to do?!?
Then her fears were silenced as he ripped of the bra, faster then she ever could. But she didn't care. She started to lower her hands to his pants, his shirt already off, she started to unbutton his pants.
His mouth playing with her nipples, his hands slowly started taking off her skirt. He stopped to get a real good look at her. Damn! She has the most perfect body! I just want to.
With his pants off and her skirt off, he flung her to the bed. And then all Hell broke loose.
He bit her panties, as she arched her back and looked to the window. She could feel his teeth slowly taking off her panties. And then she was astonished, she could feel his tongue at work, in her. She cherished every sensation. Out the window she could see that it would be day-light soon.

He let his tongue slither inside of her. Each turn he made with his tongue made a different chill run through her body. He almost laughed on how she was easily conquered. The taste of triumph in his mouth.
He brought his head up and looked up at her, with the eyes of lust. "Do you want me?"
She moaned a 'yes'. And he stood up and he towered over her. His penis standing proudly as like himself. "Are you ready for me?"
She yanked down his boxers and gazed up at her master, as she is the servant. She reached up to his crotch, and grabbed a firm hold of his, strong, erection. She started to stroke it with a gentle touch. Then she sped-up and stroked harder. Now it was his turn to moan! He started to lean into her grasp. She then slowed down to almost a stop. She got up to her knees and placed her mouth on his hard penis. She then started to suck on him, making him breathe deeper and sigh. She knew that he would ejaculate soon so she let go, dropped to the mattress and then opened her legs and her arms to him, in an embrace of seduction.
He then stratled atop of her and began to thrust. She wailed, he was in side of her! She could feel him. Oh, she moaned, and he was good at it!

He felt his penis thrusting in her wet vigina. Waves of extreme pleasure cam forth from his, center of attention. He stopped, she started to cry. Is she alright? Did I hurt her?!? No, she wants more; she's pushing her self closer to me! There is enough of me and my cock for the both us! He smiled at her and said, "Are you ready now?"
She almost screamed at him to keep going, she needed him, she wanted him now! For he was the only thing she wanted. There was nothing else!
Waited, What the Hell is wrong with him! Does he not have the balls to keep going?!?
He waited some more, to see that she truly wanted him. That she truly needed him.
They climaxed, in unison, a tidal wave of colorful pleasure traveled through them both, sweeping them away.

***

They fell to the bed. Filled with more love then they thought could exist. They looked out to the window to see.
.the Sun rising from the horizon.


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