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Author: Vengeful
Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Suspense - Published: 09-15-04 - Updated: 09-15-04 - id:1720881
A/N: Just a little something I wrote in biology. It will eventually end up being a full story, if you like it. This is just a start, so tell me what you think of it! This is my first story on this register, but I am an active member of fan fiction. Check me out there at Equestrian-Babe101. Well, read and review!

--Emily--

Silently he waits, in the shadows of the darkened room. His blade sharpened and ready to do what he asks of it. In form that resides of the bed it quiet, their breathing even.

He wonders if they have any clue as to what is about to happen. He wonders is these people knew today would be their last, if they knew that tomorrow they would be plastered on the front page of the newspaper. Victims of a heartless killer.

He glances at his watch. The neon numbers flicker. It is time. He slips out from his position in the room and creeps up to the sleeping figure. As if sensing his presence, the young woman stirs, her eyes fluttering open. He steps into her sight. This is the part he loves the most, when the victim sees him and realizes their fate. Her eyes widen in fear.

"Surprise." His voice is a hoarse whisper.

"Please don't hurt me." Pleads the woman. But as he advances towards her, she knows any efforts to stop him are futile. And even before he sinks the knife into her body, she knows he will achieve his sole purpose of visiting her.

"Hey, whose there?" a male voice comes from the other room.

"Ahh, the husband has finally come to join the party." He anticipated that, he planned on it. And his plans never fail. He quickly moves back into the shadows as a large man walks into the room. The killer smiles with pleasure as the man looks at his young wife, her mutilated body swimming in a pool of her own blood.

He sneaks up behind him, tapping the distraught man ever so gently on the shoulder. The man slowly turns, already knowing what waits for him.

He manages to let out the start of a scream before the knife plunges deep into his flesh.

A/N: kinda morbid, but I like. Well, I hope you guys liked it! Please review and tell me what you think.

--Emily--



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