written 2004.09.16
edited and uploaded 2004.09.18

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Both of these were written in my Chem class after reading Arii-neechan's
"Wish Forever." I sully her poem by saying this was "inspired" by it, so I
shall not say such. There was no inspiration from it; I merely felt like
writing at the time. So, whether or not you dislike these, go read her
poems, because they are lovely beyond all reason. n.n *promotion of
silverdream139*

Anyway, yeah. She didn't like the style, and I don't, either. This
was...the spewing of my brains. The -bad- spewing of my brains. -.-;;

My writing has gone down the drain....T-T

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"Conclusion"

Too quickly do these things end
Pointless rambles that fail to perceive
That which is meant to be explained and foreseen
We try to shun these thoughts that allow us
To make sense of our thoughts
To strive for the means to an end
Completing one's idea out of sheer necessity
Which brings me to my conclusion
That I am now proven.

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"Correct Me"

I ask you to prove me wrong
Point out my misconceptions for me
Just as the foreignly familiar touch
of tongue to tongue, lip to lip
I can see no fault in my own beliefs
Deny my thoughts, be right as you are
But if you find sense in my proposals,
understand my feelings,
I shall find another to correct me.