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Three years to the day, Melinda prepared herself for the coming of the
sorcerer. She went into the bath at sunrise and did not stop washing
herself until she was as pure as the driven snow. She then walked out to
the porch, the very same porch she had been sweeping when the sorcerer
tricked her father, and carefully she drew a large white circle on the
ground with chalk her father had purchased from the gypsy. She stepped
inside of it, and waited with what courage she could summon into her heart
for the sorcerer to come.
The sorcerer came earlier than expected.
"What?! What is this?!" The sorcerer screamed as he materialized in front
of the apple tree, pointing one gnarled finger at white circle in which
Melinda stood.
David the miller stepped out onto the porch with relief, seeing that
the remedy the gypsy had proscribed had worked. How he wanted to speak out
against that wizard, laugh at him and say, "Your trick has not succeeded!"
But still, he didn't dare. He knew that sorcerer could still slay both
Gretchen and himself out of hand if he so desired it, so he kept his mouth
sealed shut.
"Take every ounce of water away from her! Do not let her wash,
understand me!? I'll come for her again in the morning," the sorcerer
guffawed in his rasping voice, and once again disappeared.
Melinda sighed, and turned to gaze at her father, but he had already
scurried off to do the sorcerer's bidding.
The next morning, the sorcerer came again to collect the virtuous
Melinda, but shrieked again as he saw that Melinda had wept onto her hands
all that night, rendering her hands dazzlingly pure. He still could not
touch her. The girl looked up at the hideous sorcerer defiantly, her eyes
sore and rimmed with red.
"Miller!" The sorcerer called out then, summoning David to come
outside. David had stayed inside, weeping alongside Gretchen, knowing he
would not be able to bear seeing Melinda carried off by that old gnarled
stick of a man. His eyes widened in shock and disbelief at what he
witnessed, the sorcerer still could not abduct Melinda!
"Chop off her hands!" The sorcerer then screamed, pointing at the
girl. "Chop them off, do you hear me?!" The sorcerer's eyes were
practically a glowing red at this point, his body trembling with rage. His
own power seemed to emanate from him in a waving aura of filthy gray, and
echoed out when he spoke. "If you do not chop them off, I won't hold any
power over her!"
"How can you expect me to chop off the hands of my daughter," David
shouted in anguished shock. "I won't.. I won't do it!"
The sorcerer turned his enraged head towards the man, and pointed his
knotty finger at him. "If you do not do it, I'll take you instead of your
daughter." And so saying, a beam of golden light akin to electricity shot
forth from the sorcerer's fingertip and knocked David clean over, burning a
hole into his shirt and singing his chest. David moaned and slowly sat up,
looking down to his chest with fear.
"If you know what's good for you, you'll swear to do as I wish. I'll
come again in the morning to collect what is rightfully mine. "
"I swear!" David said uncontrollably in his shaking fear, before
realizing with horror what atrocity it was he just agreed to do.
The sorcerer grinned viciously, then disappeared exactly as in the
manner of which he came.
Melinda stared at her father with sudden shock as David scampered
upwards, rushing to his daughter's side and cupping her hands in his own.
"Oh, Melinda," he said sorrowfully, "I would have never promised to do
something like this were it not for my anguish..! But realize that I do not
selfishly ask this of you for myself, but for your mother's sake also.
won't you help us in this trouble, and please, forgive me for this atrocity
I must commit."
The girl sighed, her lashes flickering shut as she said with deep
resignation, "Father, do with me what you must. I am only your child."
The way Melinda said this stung David's heart deeply, but he nodded,
and lead his daughter to a nearby tree stump to chop off her hands.
He hefted the axe into the air - the same axe he had been using when
he had first encountered the sorcerer - and looking down to his daughter's
tear stained face he swung it downwards.
Hack, one, two. Melinda screamed and fainted dead away as the blood flowed
freely from the stumps where her hands were once connected, her lopped off
hands laying flaccidly on the stump soaked with her innocent blood. The
miller bent down and binded the stumps of her arms, cursing himself as he
did so, and wrapped his poor daughter's hands in a white silk cloth.
He carried his daughter home with deep shame, and buried her hands in
front of the apple tree.
Again, the wizard came for the girl, and again, he could not touch
her. Melinda had spent the entire night (once she had regained
consciousness) weeping so savagely as she never had in her entire life over
the stumps of her wrists. So pure they were, that the wizard couldn't even
bear to look at them. He screamed in agony, knowing he had lost all rights
to her now, and disappeared in the same mysterious manner in which he had
arrived.
"Oh Melinda," Gretchen said, kneeling beside her daughter to blot
away the tears that kept flowing from her eyes. "You are so virtuous and
kind that what you have done here has given us so much. I swear to it,
we'll make it up to you. For the rest of your days we will treat you as a
most precious thing.."
David nodded firmly at these words, saying: "I swear to it, my
daughter."
"Oh no," Melinda wept bitterly, "No! Can't you see I'm not safe here?
I must go away to find people who will sympathize with my situation the way
I need them to."
David lowered his head, accepting Melinda's decision. "These past
three years, you have grown, Melinda. I reckon you've grown into a fine
woman, despite your naivete. You'll be lucky to find any such people in
this world."
He stooped down beside her and embraced her whole heartedly. In the
morning, he'd have to let her go.
In the morning, Gretchen wrapped up the stumps of her daughter's wrists.
She tried to put a satchel of gold coins around Melinda's neck on a string,
but Melinda stepped back, refusing.
"Why won't you take this small amount of grace, Melinda?" Gretchen
wailed.
"Mother," Melinda replied, a bit cold despite her efforts to sound
loving, "There is no grace in accepting money that was earned through the
deceit of my father and my own blood and tears. Goodbye."
David and Gretchen stared wordlessly as Melinda walked off into the sunrise, her long black hair flying behind her in a harsh wind.