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Author: World's Blood
Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-06-04 - Updated: 11-06-04 - id:1754199
The Alters
By:
World's Blood

Chapter 1
Razor

Disclaimer: WARNING!!!!!...This is a Yaoi/Slash, which means Male/Male relationships and sex...if you are not fond of either, then please hit the back button. There is also going to be a lot of violence, rape and BBS....sooo...beware....

Author's notes: PLEASE READ!!!!!!Well, now that the warning is over, hello everyone. I am World's Blood. This story was not written by me, but the person that wrote it does not want to get the credit for it...I'm giving it to him anyway...you guys can call him Phoenix...the story, plot and characters are his...except Touya and Kauri....they are mine....or should I say my alter egos....for those of you that are wondering, I am a female...and my alter egos are male...in a way they are separate from me...we fight, and make up....and I watch Touya and Kauri get it on....then again, it isn't like I have a choice really...not like I would stop even if I did....heh heh.....the story can be really disturbing, but that is just the way my alters are....Phoenix knows them well, since he has talked with them a lot and...well...got in trouble by them....so technically this is a story made up by him, about my alters if they could have their own bodies instead of sharing mine...for those of you that are wandering, yes, Touya really is such a sadistic fucker....he drives me nuts....but then I enjoy watching him work....especially at night when he has control in my sleep....he kills and rapes and totally enjoys it....then again so do I....but I am a screwed up bitch too, so it isn't a surprise really...please leave reviews, so you can tell Phoenix if his work is good or not, and to encourage him to write more and faster....I have read as much as you guys are going to read now, and I want the rest....but he'll need ppls reviews for that!!!...this is all I wanted to say for now...btw from now on you don't HAVE to read the notes...this one was just to clear things up....but the notes, can get pretty interesting....on with the story:

Chapter 1
Razor

The sea of bodies flowed with the beat of the music inside the dance club. The laser lights danced through the fog rolling off the stage as the band played heavy rock music. Most of the club was dark save for the stage which was lit for the performance. From a balcony above the dance floor, they watched him move through the crowd as if he were one of them. His body following the music as he moved but his eyes kept glancing to the line of men that watched him.
Three of them stood out from the rest one that was dressed in skintight black leather, another that simply wore a pair of leather pants his body covered in tattoos and the last who wore a long black hooded cloak. The faces of all three stayed hidden in the deep shadows of the balcony, but he could still feel their eyes. "Does he really think he blends in?" the man in black leather asked in a soft voice. "Him, and that pretty hair of his would be impossible to miss even in this large of a crowd." "Silence Razor, remember this is no ordinary man, he is a skilled hunter and he is after your target." The voice that emanated from under the hood of the cloak was no louder than a whisper but had a dominating power in it.

"There he is in the suit by the bar." The tattooed man pointed to a man by the bar. "Good. Razor you know what to do." The hooded man's tongue snaked over his lips as he wet them, before turning to Razor and kissing him deeply on the lips. "Dont fail me."
Touya smiled as he moved through the crowd, the tattooed man had pointed him right to his pray, and now it was time for him to go to work. He was a small fish with a nice price on his head; he had stolen secrets from the government. Not normally his gig but the money was good enough, and things were looking interesting after all. He watched as the target moved away from the bar and out the door. 'Just keep walking and then I get to have some fun'. Touya whispered to himself. He gave the man a few minutes then walked out the door, his eyes scanned the parking lot. He thought he had waited too long when he found it empty. Then he heard sounds coming from the trash littered alley behind the club. He moved toward the alley placing his back to the wall as he looked around the corner.
Razor stood there on one leg his other leg lifting the target up, his right boot heel buried in the targets neck. The dim light of the stage door played off the skin tight black leather. He turned his face toward Touya his long black hair moved like a waterfall of gleaming black silk behind a purple mist. Touya looked into those cold ice blue eyes, that stared out at him from almost feminine alabaster colored face with bright red lips all framed by purple highlights. "Oh hello pretty hair, I'm sorry you wanted him alive, didn't you?" Razor licked his lips, as he looked Touya over. "You bastard, you killed my rent for the month." Touya growled from deep in his chest while he edged toward Razor. "Aw I'm so sorry pretty hair, if you want him," with a quick twist of his hips, Razor slung his leg around and threw the corpse of the man into Touya. "You can have him, as for me I'll just keep this briefcase full of cash. Call it my incentive program. He was not much fun, but you my red haired boy, you will be exquisite to kill. Come to the old Soya building on the east side of town in an hour and we will play there, just you and me."
The sound of high heels on asphalt echoed down the alley as Razor ran off, Touya grumbled as the rolled the corpse off him. "God I hate dead weight." He checked the man's pulse even though there was no need, the hole in his throat and the blood that coated his shirt showed he was dead. Touya growled while standing up and glaring down the dark ally. "Yep tonight is really getting interesting. Mr. High heels wants to play, so then lets play Ill give him his hour to set things up, make it more fun when I make a bitch out of him."

Razor watched as the Touya walked into the lobby of the old building, he ran his tongue over his lips as he eyed the red leather clad frame. As Touya crossed the lobby, Razor's voice began to come from a speaker phone on the front desk. "Hello pretty hair, I can see you, can you see me? No I guess not, lets play a game. Somewhere on the tenth floor is the cash you're after, and somewhere, I am waiting with a trap for my little red haired mouse. Come on up and play, I am soo lonely up here." Touya moved out through the door to the stairs while growling to himself about how much this guy was beginning to annoy him. He studied the stairs; they were old and had not seen a good cleaning in years but did not look as if they would give way under him without a decent explosive charge. He climbed the stairs slowly watching each camera as it followed him until he was in another cameras sight.
Finally, he reached the tenth floor and walked out into a two-tier complex that had once held the offices of the executive staff of the building, on one side of the room. On the other stood a wall of window that let the moon light flood in to illuminate the room. He stepped up on top of an empty fountain that dominated the center of the room to get a good look at his surroundings. He could see all of the offices on the bottom tier were open with their shades up. The same went for all but two of the offices, on the top tier of the room, on either end of the walkway. He noticed flower beds had once ringed the fountain and lined the windows, this office had been truly a marvel in its day. The remains of tapestries and wall scrolls still hung on the walls, and he could still see the outline where a stone garden had once set in the far corner of the room. Now it was just a dead room wasting away.
"Oh decisions, decisions which one to choose. Door number one or door number two." The voice came from another speaker phone at the base of the fountain. The sound made Touya jump slightly thinking someone had snuck up on him. "I'm really getting sick of this asshole." Touya growled out under his breath then jumped from the fountains top to the small flight of stairs that connected the upper level offices to the floor. He walked to his left and reached down turning the doorknob then pushed the door open. There on the dust covered desk sat the case full of money. He stepped into the office to reach from the case and felt the world shift under him as the floor tipped and fell under him.
His body fell and went out of the window to the office below him, The roar of the desk sliding down the still collapsing floor and the breaking of glass filled his ears. Touya slammed into the floor and bounced before he rolled into the fountain as the desk fell against the fountain pinning his leg in place. Razor stepped forward from a janitors closet under the small fight of stairs and walked over to him. "I'm sorry I should have elaborated more, the trap and the money were in the same room, not very fair of me was it?" He gloated while moving so his long legs straddled Touya's chest before he bent down.
His blue eyes gazed into Touyas from under his long black hair with purple highlights in the front. He ran his right hand over Touya's face, letting his feminine fingernails brush over his cheek. Then he lowered himself down placing his knees on Touya's arms pinning them in place.
Touya felt a hand slid down his pants and long fingers wrap slowly around his cock. The fingers began to caress and stroke the warm flesh of his member, then he felt the soft rhythm of the hand tightening around him and relaxing as it pumped up and down his shaft.
"Mmmhmm poor, poor pretty haired Touya. You're all mine now." Razor leaned down and pressed his lips to Touya's in a rough kiss, his tongue ran over Touya's lips. His hand began to stroke Touya's member, his fingers caressing the sensitive head down to his balls to force itto harden.
Touya took his free leg and pushed against the desk moving it a little. After a few seconds he had his foot in place to kick the desk upright he just had to wait for the right moment. Razor pulled his hand from Touya's pants and ran his tongue over his fingers to taste his pray.
"Yum I'm going to have such fun with you". Razor said in a deep, breathless whisper.
"Sorry but I think I'm the one that will be having fun here." Touya growled as he bucked his hips throwing Razor off of him, while he kicked the desk upright and off of his leg. Both men rolled to their feet at the same time and looked at each other.
Razor stepped forward driving a kick at Touya's stomach, the deadly blades on his heel gleamed in the moonlight as they moved toward their target. Touya stepped to the side in time to watch the blades rip into the desk's top, sending splinters flying out of the wood, and giving him an idea. He turned from Razor and ran up the stairs to the second floor and waited in front of the door frame at the top of the stairs. Razor took his time climbing the stairs.
"Now why did you spoil my fun, I was going to let you have one last fuck before you die," Razors voice changed as he moved to kick Touya once more "but now I'll just kill you."
Touya ducked under the kick and let that deadly heel sink deep into the wooden frame of the door with a soft sound like a knife sticking into wood. Then he stood up and wrapped his arms around Razors leg, his arms pulled down as he legs pushed up forcing the leg to bend in the wrong way. The sound of Razors knee being ripped out of place was almost drowned out by the scream that flew from his lip.
Touya quickly drove his foot into Razors other knee snapping it out of place as well, the black haired man fell to the ground and began to try and crawl away.
"We're not done yet." Touya closed his hand in Razors hair as he spoke and drug him the rail at the top of the stairs. He took Razors hair in his hand and used them as rope to bind Razors hand on the rail forcing him up onto his knees before reaching around to undo his pants.
Touya pushed Razors pants down and started to look him over. A tribal tattoo stopped just above his nicely curved ass and wrapped slowly around the front to stop just above his member. The pain had started to cause the eight inch long cock that hung between Razors legs to shrink, but it started to harden again with a quick brush of Touya's hand over it.
Touya's hand slipped down Razors member and grabbed his balls giving them a hard painful squeeze that forced another scream from his lips. Touya grinned a dark sadistic grin, then stepped back and began to unbuckle his pants, his fingers slowly slid the zipper down. His cock grew stiff while he watched Razors body twist and tremble from that sound. He slowly slid his pants down letting the cold metal buckle of his belt run over Razors nice round ass, Touya let out a soft laugh as the man jumped as the metal touched him.
"What is wrong, don't you want to play some more?" Touya mocked his toy as he began to kneel behind him.
"Please stop, I need a doctor, I think my legs are broken." Razor said in gasps the pain moved trough him in waves.
"No, I just dislocated your knees. Now take your fucking like a man, bitch." Touya growled, his fingers closing in Razors hair as he pressed his hardness to the man's tight hole. Razor grunted in pain as Touya forced his cock into the tight grip of his ass.
"That's a good little bitch." Touya rested his weight on Razor to apply more pressure to the injured mans knees. He moaned and pumped his hips harder to the sound of Razors screams, his hard cock forcing its way into the black haired man, then drawing out to the tip before forcing its way back in again. He enjoyed the feeling of Razors tight warm canal trembling with pain as it engulfed his hard sex.
"Please call a doctor for me when your done, if you leave me hear Ill die." Razors voice had degraded to a horse whisper spoken between the high pitched grunts brought from Touya's member. Touya moaned in pleasure as he felt the climax building inside him.
"You're a good fuck," Touya moaned out softly "but not that good of a one." His free hand grasped Razors chin, the muscles in his arms tightened as he twisted Razors head sharply. The cracking sounds made as Razor's neck broke were muffled by Touya's own screams of pleasure as he came, his hot cum spilling into Razor as he began to twitch in his death throws.

Author's notes: Well, this is it for now....I don't know about you, but I think Phoenix is a good writer....especially for a guy....I don't mean that as insulting or anything, I just mean that he isn't interested in guys or shounen ai or yaoi but he is really good at writing a story about it...which is kind of surprising, I guess.....and yes, Touya fucking some one and then killing them is a totaly normal thing for him....he goes afer only pretty boys thought, the rest only die....the pretty once get fucked first....he heh he.....I think in the next chapter you'll meet Kauri...but I am not sure....Phoenix isn't telling me anything.....then again that is because I asked him not to...I would rather read it already written....so I know as much as you...I hope you are going to enjoy it...btw....technically, this is not the whole first chapter, but all that he wrote yesterday for two hours, because he promised me....the real first chapter is supposed to be much longer, but I'll put it up as he gives it to me....well....that is it for now...pls review....all three of us are going to read them and answer them....you can ask questions out of Touya, and I will try to type his answers without offending anyone....I don't know if that will be possible, but I'll try my best....see ya next time...no idea when that is going to be, but unlike me, Phoenix actually writes more and faster....so the updat ewill be soon....


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