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Author: nobuykisama
Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Humor - Reviews: 302 - Published: 11-08-04 - Updated: 01-16-05 - Complete - id:1756194
Okay, this is my first original story so please don't flame me if it is bad. ; I'm trying my best here. Overall, I wanted to make an original story with a twist in it, so I just thought of this story. I hope you all like it. Give it at least until two chapters. ;

Here is what is suppose to be in the front cover:

Title: Disguised Rating: PG-13 (I always put my stories pg-13 since I don't know what type of rating it can be) Genre: General, drama, humor, etc. Warning: Some mix-ups and cursing and some violence Summary: Kazuki is forced to go to an all-boy private boarding School, and is forced to stay there until Kazuki graduates from that school, which is the most highly educated school in the world. But can Kazuki handle it with a BIG secret that must be kept secret?

Chapter One

A boy with dark blue hair, a little past his shoulders, it tied in a ponytail. He had innocent, yet piercing blue eyes as he looked out the window of the view of the front boarding school. The front view was really an awesome view. It had green grass and trees in place, not a single piece of trash on the floor. Everyone would love the view except for one little thing; this school was a private-all boy boarding school. No ordinary boy came to this school. Only boys who their parents had a lot of money for their child to came here. Even though it was really expensive to come to this school, this school was 100 educated students guaranteed. Kids' who were in this school was most likely the smartest kid in central Japan. It was supposedly a proven fact. The boy was then knocked out of his thoughts of the school when the teacher yelled out his name.

"Asato Hibiki! Pay attention sir. I've been calling your name six or seven times. Please read the bottom paragraph on page 136." Said the teacher as he then looked down at the book, to get ready to follow Hibiki.

"Y-Yes sir!" Said Hibiki quickly as he opened the book and started reading out loud. At the same time, he thought one thing. 'Damn, I'm so glad that Mr. Jen is a sub. Our actual teacher would have chewed me up and spit me out. I've never been punished but all the kids that have, the next day they are all quiet, and always listening to him. They are like afraid of him..Even the most trouble making kids get all quiet the next day.' He continued to read the book when all of a sudden the assistant principal came in. Of course though, most people would think 'women' whenever someone said 'principal' or 'assistant principal' but since this was an all- boy school, there are absolutely NO girls. Hibiki stared at the two adults talking; he couldn't really hear them since they were whispering but he wasn't really staring at the two to try and see what they were saying. He was in his own mind thinking. 'I feel sorry for girls. There isn't a high educated school for girls so they can be just as smart as we can.' Most guys thought that they were better then girls, but not Hibiki. Even though he never sometimes did his work, he still thought girls were equal as boys. That's why he wished there was an all girl school for the girls. But there wasn't; He was then knocked out of his thoughts when Mr. Jen spoke out.

"Okay. We have a new student. He's transferred here from a public school so we will give him time for him to know the rules. I expect all of you to be kind to him." After Mr. Jen had finished speaking, he motioned the new student to come in from the door. A boy came in slowly as he walked in front of the class looking down.

"M-My names'..Amano Kazuki. I came from Domino Public High School. This is my first time..being in a private school." Said Kazuki quietly but loud enough for everyone at least in the class to hear.

"Well, you will sit next to Asato Hibiki and he will help you get ready and he will clear things up about a private school. You will also be sharing a dorm with him a well. Hibiki, you will be in charge in telling him the rules and all. If he breaks any of the rules, and he doesn't know them, you will be punished instead of him." Said Mr. Jen and with that, he was about to look down at his seating chart to tell where Hibiki was but Kazuki simply walked ahead and sat down at the desk. Kazuki didn't know who Hibiki was, but Kazuki knew that Hibiki was sitting next to him because there was only one empty seat throughout the entire class. So it was pretty obvious where Hibiki was. Kazuki looked at the teacher as the teacher nodded. "Hibiki, raise your hand so Kazuki may know who you are." Hibiki rolled his eyes as he then raised his hand. To Kazuki's surprise, Hibiki was sitting right next to him. Kazuki just gave Hibiki a small smile, as he looked down a little embarrassed.

Hibiki cocked an eyebrow. 'What's with this kid? He's probably a shy type who is very quiet. Damn, that means that I'm going to have to open up his shell.' Thought Hibiki when all of a sudden, he noticed something as he glanced at Kazuki's body. 'Damn..is this kids really wimpy or what? He looks so skinny, like he has no muscle. He looks wimpy, has no muscle, a shy type of boy, looks like he will cry any second if someone is mean to him, and also looks like anyone in the world can beat him up. Is this what public school boys' look like? Dang, I'm glad I was in a private school all my life. I'll fix this kid up though.' Thought Hibiki as he then sighed, causing Kazuki to look at him.

'This is Hibiki? Who is he? I hope he isn't one of those types of guys who are mean and a bully, and I've never had a guy teacher. I'm more used to a female teacher. I didn't know that an all-boy private boarding school would also mean guy teachers! Oh well, I shouldn't complain. All the teachers are the same, right? I hope so.' Thought Kazuki sighing and swallowed hard before speaking to Hibiki. "Um..w-what page are we..on.." Asked Kazuki looking down, and not making any eye contact.

'DAMMIT! I HATE KIDS WHO ARE SHY! HE NEEDS TO STOP ACTING LIKE THIS! DO I REALLY HAVE TO SPEND FOREVER WITH THIS KIDS?! I'M GOING TO GO INSANE!!' Screamed Hibiki in his head but of course, he didn't show it upon his face. He instead grabbed the book off of Kazuki's desk and turned the page to where the teacher was reading. Hibiki guessed that Mr. Jen had forgotten that Hibiki was suppose to read because the teacher was now reading the paragraph he was suppose to read out loud to the class. "We are at the bottom of page 133. Start the-" Started Hibiki but was cut off by the teacher's sudden voice.

"Asato Hibiki! Why are you talking?" Ask Mr. Jen with some-what piercing eyes.

"I was telling Kazuki what page we were on, and where you were reading at sir." Said Hibiki confidently, but in the inside he was kind of worried.

"Okay, that is fine. You may continue." Said Mr. Jen and was about to continue reading when all of a sudden, a big booming voice yelled out, causing Kazuki to jump and blush in embarrassment for jumping.

"I think not! That is unacceptable! Next time I hear Hibiki talk, I'll give him a consequence so bad that he'll never forget it for the rest of his life. Even that wimpy new twerp." The man came in and he had a dark brown mustache, thick brown eyes and pure piercing black beady eyes that sent shivers down Kazuki's spine; This man was also very..wide. Kazuki wanted to look away and not stare at him, but knowing all ready that this guy was strict, he forced himself to stare at the..fat or really wide man.

"Yes Sir!" Said Hibiki automatically and quickly.

"Yes Sir!" Said Kazuki quickly while blushing furiously. He wasn't sure if he was supposed to say that, or if he had just totally embarrassed himself.

The wide dude just grinned starring at Kazuki with his black beady piercing eyes, which caused a dark, cold shiver down Kazuki's spine. "Good Boy. Now, " Said the man turning to Mr. Jen, "Your job is done Mr. Substitute. You can get out of my class now." Mr. Jen nodded as he then quickly left the room. The wide man then turned and glanced at the class, but Hibiki could tell he was looking at Kazuki. This teacher was the actual teacher. Hibiki starred at the teacher, but inside his desk, he was writing a note on a small piece of paper. "LISTEN UP! Twerps who are new, this is a boarding school! You live HERE now. Forget about your parents and little things about your family. Since I'm your teacher, you are ALL my children and I WILL make you all great educated students, if you like it or not! I can do whatever I want with you! If you are failing, I will give you extra work and make you continue re-testing until you get a VERY high B or A! My name is Mr. Kazutaki. I'm glad to be your teacher you slackers!" And with that he was about to turn around to go to his own desk when he glanced at Kazuki. "And I expect Amano Kazuki to know everything about this school by tomorrow. Even wearing a school uniform."

Kazuki looked down, blushing in embarrassment. 'I hate this school..I don't like private schools..I want to go back to my public school..' Thought Kazuki. Kazuki was then knocked out of his thoughts when he noticed a note being passed to him. He slowly took it and opened it, inside his desk. He then read it to himself in his thoughts:

'Good going on saying 'yes sir' right after me

Otherwise you would have gotten in big trouble.
You catch on pretty quick'
-Hibiki

Once Kazuki had finished the note, he sighed silently and smiled. 'I'm glad I did that by instinct. There is something odd about this teacher though.' Thought Kazuki while looking up. The teacher was sitting in his desk eating a yellow Twinkie and working on his computer. At the sight of the Twinkie, Kazuki felt hungry. He looked up at the schedule that was given to him at the front of the school, and his face fell as he looked at the clock. 'Just as I thought, I transferred here too late.' Thought Kazuki. He had transferred too late to go get lunch. They served lunched at exactly 12pm sharp, and it was already 1:30pm. Kazuki's stomach slightly churned in hunger but he tried to ignore it. Kazuki then wondered if they were allowed to buy any snacks. Since Kazuki moved here, it was long ways to drive so they had to leave really early to where he didn't have enough time to eat breakfast since his mom woke up late; she said he would make it to the private school in time for lunch. Apparently his mom was wrong. Kazuki then looked at the book and just continued reading until the rest of the chapter.

Before it was time for the class to end, Mr. Kazutaki stood up and literally made the whole class jump like a scared frog. "LISTEN UP SCUMS! The class is about to end. Your homework is to now read four chapters of the book. When the bell rings, I would like to see Amano Kazuki and Asato Hibiki." And right after that, the bell rang. Kazuki's stomach twisted and turned. Him going face to face with Kazutaki was the last thing he wanted to do. Besides, he had to go to the bathroom. He stood up and then was about to walk to Kazutaki's desk when Hibiki pulled him back and whispered close to Kazuki's ear.

"Just follow after what I do and say." Whispered Hibiki for only Kazuki to hear and then went on ahead, Kazuki followed right behind him. Once they were at the front of Mr. Kazutaki's desk, he grinned at them, and stood up.

"Well, the reason why I called you two hear was because you two are the only two that are causing a disruption in MY class. Why? Give me an Explanation!" Yelled Mr. Kazutaki a little mad.

"Amano Kazuki is a new student and had just arrived in the middle of our class. He transferred suddenly and wasn't sure of everything. So, I've been assigned to help him and we will be rommat-" Started Hibiki but was suddenly cut off by one motion.

SLAP!!

Hibiki Stood still a little shocked as pain was soon felt across his cheek.
He then looked at Kazutaki stunned. All Kazutaki did was glare but then smirk. "Like I told the whole class. Since the day you all set foot in this room and were assigned to be in this class, you're all mine. Not to
mention this school has a right to still discipline children. 'Amano Kazuki is a new student and had just arrived in the middle of our class,'" Mimicked Kazutaki, "Excuse me but this isn't your class or anybody else's
but MINE!" He then turned and glared at Kazuki. Kazuki kept quiet and
forced himself to look straight into Mr. Kazutaki's face. "And you," Roared Kazutaki wile pulling Kazuki's shirt, literally almost ripping his shirt off, "You will from now on obey the rules of this school! Don't you ever read the information sheet that is given to you about this school! I saw you glance at it! Just because today is the first day for you to this school, doesn't mean you can come unprepared! You are irresponsible and a wimpy weak malchik! I'll promise you one thing though. If you don't have a school uniform by tomorrow on, or any of the supplies you were suppose to have, boy, you better be ready to face some series consequences!" Yelled Mr. Kazutaki pushing Kazuki so hard that it literally knocked Kazuki to the floor. "You are dismissed!" And with that, the two boys literally ran out
with only two words they yelled back at the teacher. "Yes sir!"

As soon as they were out of the classroom and shut the door behind them, Hibiki sighed out of frustration. "Damn! First day a new kid comes, who gets the blame just for trying to help him? ME!" Said Hibiki to himself but then turned to Kazuki. "But it isn't your fault. Come on. I'll show you to our dorm."

"..."

Hibiki raised an eyebrow. "What's wrong?"

"Um..back there..The teacher called me a weak and wimpy malchik. What does that mean?" Asked Kazuki a little shy and embarrassed.

"Oh, Mr. Kazutaki is Russian so he still speaks sometimes Russian. Malchik.hmmm.I read it in a book once. I think it means the word 'boy.' Yea, it means boy in Russian." Said Hibiki with a smile.

"Um..do you..know where the bathroom is?" Asked Kazuki looking down.

Hibiki stared but then laughed. "You crack me up kid. Okay, the restroom is down the hall to the left. You can't miss it. I'll stay right here." Said Hibiki smiling and crossing his arms.

Kazuki nodded in agreement as he then ran. Once he got to the bathrooms, he stopped and looked at the door. There was only one door. Kazuki then remembered.

Flashback
Kazuki's house

"WHAT! NO WAY! You can't do that! Isn't that against the law! No no no no! I won't allow it!" Said Kazuki angry, flaming mad at her mother.

"Oh don't worry. It's not fair that there is a best school in the whole country but it's only for boys. You are going to go!" Yelled the mother sternly.

"NO! I'm not going! They won't allow me there anyway!" Said Kazuki now confident.

The mother just crossed her arms and grinned. "Do you really think that I would send you looking like that."

Kazuki then froze. "W-Wait a minute..you wouldn't.."

All the mother did was nod. "You are going to be a boy."

"B-But..I'M A GIRL! A FEMALE!" Yelled Kazuki. She couldn't believe her mom. Her mom was going insane. How could she go to a school of only boys? And worst of all, not only just a private all-boy school, it was a boarding school! She had to practically live there, but in a room with a guy. "No mom! I'm not doing it!"

"Don't worry, you got small breasts and you can where a gym strapper to make you look like you have a flat chest, like a guy." Advised her mom.

"THOSE GYM STRAPPER BRA THINGS SUCK THE LIFE OUT OF ME!" Exclaimed Kazuki not believing what her mom was saying.

"And if we cut your hair a certain way, you will for sure look like a boy. Just cut your hair short enough!"" Said her mother happily.

"I DON'T WANT TO CUT MY HAIR! I LOVE MY LONG HAIR!" Screamed Kazuki with her jaw dropped literally to the floor. She couldn't believe her mom.

"Well, we should go get your hair cut now. Come on, let's go." Said the mother smiling. "I want my daughter to be the smartest women. We'll show them all that girls can be just as smart as guys!" She then laughed evilly walking out the door.

"ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING TO ME!" Yelled Kazuki.

"Come along dear..no wait. You are a guy now so..come along son" Called out her mom in her sweet toned voice, acting as though nothing drastic was going to happen.

MOOOOOOOOOM!" Yelled Kazuki as she then sat in the front seat of the van. "Why are you doing this? I'm not really smart. I don't really do athletic ability at all and boy's private boarding school will for sure have one that is a requirement."

"Oh don't worry. You will only be a boy until you graduate from that school." Said Kazuki's mother happily.

"But what about dorms!" Said Kazuki still mad.

"What about them?" Asked her mother obviously clueless.

"MOM! A guy or even guys will be sleeping in the dorm! What if he tries to hit on me!" Said Kazuki all worried and mostly mad. She was trying so hard to try to change her insane mother's mind; it obviously wasn't working.

"Oh don't be silly. The school is an all-boy school. They won't hit on you unless they are..yea." Said her mom not finishing the sentence and started laughing.

"NOT WHAT I MEANT! What I meant was that what if a kid finds out and tries to hit on me!" Said Kazuki.

"Just tell the others kids that he isn't straight." Said the mother simply and then laughed. Her mother, seeing the angry Kazuki's face grow into hate, she simply just smiled at Kazuki widely. "Look! A hair-cut place!" And in one swift turn with the wheel, she was in the driveway. She was obviously looking past the angry face.

"Mom! I'm not getting out of the car!" Yelled Kazuki sitting tight in her seat.

Her mother then glared. "What do you mean by that? Don't you want to be a very smart child who knows a lot?"

"But that's the point! Look at me! You've seen my grades! I'm not really good! I'm not really an athletic type of person or anything! What makes you think I'm going to do good in a private all boy boarding school!" Exclaimed Kazuki but her eyes went wide in fear as she then thought of another worried problem. "W-wait! If I have to live in an all-boy boarding school, that means..that means.." Started Kazuki but the more she tried to get the words out, the more her face had a sick look across her face.

"What?" Asked her mother clueless again.

"I'm going to live there! That means that there will be one bathroom! No girl bathrooms! How am I going to go! And what about when we take a shower?" Said Kazuki. Kazuki finally couldn't take it anymore, as everything seemed to blur and Kazuki fell unconscious.

End of Flashback

Kazuki sighed. She remembered that there was no such thing as a girl's restroom in an all-boy private boarding school. She then shook her head. How was she going to go through this? She had never been in a boy's restroom. Kazuki swallowed hard before she was about to step in. As soon as she had only placed one foot in the boys' restroom, a hand was all of a sudden on her shoulder, causing her to freeze stiff and jump back. "I-I WASN'T GOING IN THERE! I'LL GO INT THE GIRLS RESTROOM!" Said Kazuki quickly without thinking. She then realized whom it was when she turned around.

Hibiki stared at Kazuki with an odd expression. "What? Girls restroom?"

I..no no no!" Laughed Kazuki nervously. "That's not what I meant. I was just thinking of my sister yelling in the past. Something about the bathroom."

Hibiki stared at him for a moment before shrugging it off. "Anyway, you gonna go? I gotta go too" And with that, Hibiki walked in ahead of him. Hibiki then stopped, turned around and fixed Kazuki's shirt that Mr. Kazutaki had almost ripped off. "Don't let Mr. Kazutaki get to you. He's just a cold-hearted, evil, creepy bastard." And with that, he left and went in the restroom.

Kazuki swallowed hard as she closed her eyes and walked in. She peeked and noticed a stall. She quickly took that chance and went in, and locking it. She then wondered something as she sat on the toilet seat. "H-Hibiki?" Called out Kazuki.

"Yea?" Responded Hibiki.

"Um..you had to go to the restroom..so..why are you next to a sink?" Asked Kazuki.

A/N: Okay, that was the end of that chapter and I hope you all liked the first chapter. don't worry, it supposedly is going to get better. I have it all planned out. This story as you all can see now though, is about a girl who is dressed up as a boy to be the worlds educated girl. And her BIG secret is for her to keep her actual identity a secret without anyone knowing it. I hope you enjoyed and please review!



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