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Author: Phillippa of the Phoenix
Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-18-04 - Updated: 11-18-04 - id:1762112

Yes, I do know this is not grammatically correct, but it does sound a lot better then "Let Us Go" and . . . it's sort of from the prospective of a small child, who wouldn't care if they were being grammatically incorrect. I actually wrote this at the beach . . .

Let’s Us Go

let’s us go
go out
out to the sea
the green sea

come with me: we’ll go
go far
far to the sea
the noisy sea

come with me
let’s us go to the sea
far out to the sea
the noisy green sea

. . . I promise not to splash.



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