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Author: Ash-chan
Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-25-04 - Updated: 11-25-04 - id:1767560

A/N: Hiya everyone! I found this poem I wrote a few weeks ago, but didn’t bother posting. I thought it sort of iffy, but I think I’ll leave that up to you guys. As always, constructive criticism is very much welcome, as are regular reviews. ;;

Not Alone

See the hurt?

The betryal in my eyes?

I’m swimming in dangerous waters

Falling beneath the shifting currents

My fingertips just inches from the surface

But I need to reach out

Just to see the light of the sun

And then you’re no longer there

So I can’t make it without you

See the pain?

Tearing up my heart?

We’re both drowning

Our voices beyond their ears

And falling into nothingness

We’re blinded just trying to find

Our way back to the light

But now it’s all over

And we’ve lost this game



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