Even Though…

Even though I’m down so low
Even though I can’t say hello
Even though you’re far away
And I’m so sure that you won’t stay.

Even though you don’t know me
Everyday you make me see
I’ll be behind you no matter what
Hurt you, that’s something I cannot.

Even though you do not see
How important you are to me
As if I’m I’m merely a speck of dust
Which needs to be cleaned up--- and fast!

Even though my efforts are worthless
And everyday I do get restless
It is okay, as long as you’re happy
Maybe someday I will get lucky.

For I will always be waiting right here
So dry your tears and do not fear
‘Cause if you don’t have someone to run to
Notice me, I’m right here for you.

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Well, another poem I wrote out of frustration. Geez… My love life has be so like, zero. I wrote this after “It’s You…” I finished this whole thing in school. And that’s the place where I actually spend time writing poems because when I get home, there’s only enough time for homework, reviewing, reading and then writing prose. I guess I reserved poems for school because… well, I don’t need to explain everything in poems. And unlike prose, it isn’t that long. There’s no point denying that I’m better at prose but with poems… I feel so totally simple. I don’t know… I’m kinda analyzing what I’m feeling or experiencing.

So, the poem---again--- is for my semi-crush. And about this line: “Even though you don’t know me”, well the guy knows me. What I really wanted to say is that we’re not really close. W

For lustinthewind

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing “It’s You…”! I really enjoyed reading you poems. The first one I’ve read is “Vanilla.” It’s really nice… Who am I kidding? It’s really, really GOOD! I’m actually just a beginner in poem writing so I’m not that good in judging poems but I’ve tried evaluating yours and I don’t see any mistakes. I promise that when I become more skilled I’ll r&r your poems again. I haven’t posted a review for your other poems and even the prose but I’ll surely post one. I’m just in the process of creating it. He he. I like my reviews to be long as much as possible because I really want to make sure I say what I want to and that there are no stupid realizations like “I also should’ve told her that (insert reason)…”

Anyway, it’s been great! Again, thanks so much and keep on writing, kay?

Reach for the stars!

--love-in-a-mist--