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-Pain comes over me-
My heart is
cold
and my hands are numb.
My sorrow is old
to the pain I
succumb.
No one to help me
no one finds
what's wrong with
me
and all I've left behind.
I'm a mystery
to many and
myself.
My friend misery
in the form of an elf.
For my pain
is dressed
in a fantasy and dreams
for that way I am blessed
to
think my pain is not as it seems.
So I close my eyes
imagening
faeries fly over me
but it's all a lie.
It's only pain what
comes over me.
By, Ana
F.
Date: 4/Dic/04
Time: 11:19am
Oh yeah, this one I like, nice rhymes, nice story telling, turns of scenes and good rhythm. me likey.