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Hiya! I’m back with another crappy poem made by……… dun dun dun……… ME OF COURSE!!! I’ve just finished my exams! WOOHOO!!!! OH YEAH!!!! FREEDOM!!!!!
Anyways, thanks to all those people who have reviewed my previous poems! They mean a lot to me! And now, here’s another poem! Enjoy!
I”LL NEVER FEEL OUR FIRST SWEET KISS
Gazing at the starlit sky
My lips breathe out a silent sigh
Of only you knew what was on my mind
Then maybe, perhaps, fate would’ve been kind
Things would never be the same
All this just because you came
Pure happiness, so far away
A darkened world is where I lay
Thinking of what could’ve been
Of all the rest you’ll always win
Just when things just seemed so right
You disappear from my own sight
Before I said what’s deep in my heart
Our destinies tore us apart
My words of love you’ll never hear
Forced to live the life I fear
A world where all but one exist
The one who taught and gave me bliss
Once just one, with you was two
And now I’m back to one without you
I long to see your spiked brown hair
To wish to gaze at eyes we share
To smell your scent would seem so real
Your gentle touch I dream to feel
A body clothed in shirts and jeans
A body I now just see in dreams
No voice to tell me I am safe
No one to make me feel so brave
Protective arms I’ll always miss
I’ll never feel our first sweet kiss
Lips I’ll only dream to kiss………
I’ll never feel our first sweet kiss………
Umm… how was it? If you like it, please review! If not, then… uh… still review! I need comments on how to improve! Thankies!
By the way, I’m working on a story now. I’m actually done with chapter one, but I have to edit it. Please read it when it’s out! )