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Another generally depressing poem. It was really scary because I showed this to my mum and she started crying! I then realised that it was really not a good poem to be showing her with everything that’s gone down recently. I felt really bad. Anyway, please review!
One Way Or Another
She stands alone
With no one to turn to,
With no one who would understand
Her mind is a mess
A mix or emotion and the cold truth
She can’t escape
She can’t hide
Others whisper
noting her pale face
and lost weight.
But she doesn’t hear them
She doesn’t care
All that matters now
is the pain she feels
Her face remains expressionless
She will not shed a tear
But in her eyes they can see
the confusion and turmoil
that she faces
They can feel her desperation,
her need for release
And yet
they choose to do nothing
They watch her strain
They see her resolve begin to weaken
But it’s not until she cracks
until she breaks down
That they think they should have helped
should have done something
It’s too late now
Her wish for release was granted
One way or another