|Everything I Never Wanted: Original
Author: sarabeth120 PM
Currently be rewritten and reposted, see profile for information and to read the reposted version!Rated: Fiction M - English - Supernatural - Words: 421 - Reviews: 522 - Favs: 116 - Follows: 77 - Updated: 07-09-08 - Published: 12-23-04 - id: 1790323
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Okay... so it's been over a year since I updated and unfortunately, not only is this not an update, but this story is going to stay unfinished. I apologize, really I do, but there are so many things wrong with it that I can't even finish it because the ending I'm thinking of using would make no sense because the story has so many plot holes and problems within it (most of which I desperately want to fix). So, the ending would do nothing, but confuse everyone.
I'm sorry, really I am, but I started this story back in 2004, when I was 16, I'm 20 now… and my writing has improved so much since then that I feel that the best idea is to leave this story incomplete for the time being. I believe that it's only fair for myself as well as you guys… I believe that you guys, being such dedicated readers and/or reviewers, deserve to read the best quality of a story that I can give you.
Now, before you all start freaking out… I am going to rewrite this (I even have part of the first chapter of it almost completed) and I'll be posting that instead of finishing this story. I know a lot of you don't want me to do that, but I can't even look at this story without cringing, I need to rewrite it.
I will be leaving this up for a while, so you can continue to read it while I rewrite it. Though, I will be taking it down very soon… I'll be doing that simply because we're not allowed to have two versions of the same story on here. Though, I don't know how similar the two will be once I'm done with the rewrite… the way things are going now, the rewrite is going to be drastically different.
While you guys are waiting for me to start posting the rewrite, you can read some of my other stories (mainly just "Expect the Unexpected") or any story on my favorites to pass the time.
Oh, and for any of you who have questions, comments or suggestions for the rewrite, please let me know!
EDIT: As you can see, the wholes story has been taken down... I just posted the first chapter of the updated version and I didn't want to get in trouble for having both versions up at the same time.